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I love how you kept her strong and Stern but also alluring to a man like him. Really excited can't wait for more please brainstorm and write quickly thank you.

RedKay77

Oh, I cannot wait to see where this goes!

You've captured Clegane so perfectly: his bitterness, his rage, his sheer bloodyminded persistence. Under it all is some small spark of humanity, and you let us see it when he thinks about Tormund. He cannot bear the thought of a rival, one he can't cow or frighten, and yet those are the very hings he looks for in Brienne.

Such a lovely, lovely beginning, and I'm all shivery with anticipation.