Oh snap ! Tyrell is on to Harry and Dennis . Hope they're careful or they might get caught . It's gonna be interesting seeing what's gonna happen . Will needs to be punched ! Glad he left so Dennis could check on Tom . So he finally found out Will and Tom's secret , I hope so . But damn it you have me on pins and needles with that cliffhanger ! Ahhhhh!! I know it will be worth the wait . Just a great chapter all in all. Thumbs up. :)
Yup ,it's getting harder to sympathize with Wil . His actions are just plain cruel . Throwing cold water at Tom didn't endear himself to anyone. I hope Tom gets freed soon . Also I just love ioki . He is wise to give Dennis good advice . I just he can help Tom soon . And yes , great chapter . I always look forward to them. :)
Without a doubt another great chapter . Will went too far , well farther this time . Raping his brother and not feeling bad about it. I'm finding hard to sympathize with Will with his latest action . I do hope he gets it in the end . And I love van Halen ! When it's love it's appropriate for the moment . Thumbs up ! :)
This just keeps getting better . I knew Dennis would come around and see the error of his ways . First though the interaction between him and ioki was great . I hate to admit it ,but they do make a good team . Still like Booker and Hanson though . Speaking of which it sounds like Tom had a premonition. Hmmm . Now you have me wondering what hell Will will put Tom through . I'm sure it's not gonna be pleasant . Thumbs up.
All I have t say is ...bad Booker ! For shame Dennis ! I think Tom should stand up for himself and tell someone what's going on . If he doesn't sooner or later Will will kill him . As for fuller teaming Harry and Dennis, hmm,I would've preferred Doug, but ioki is a good cop. Thumbs up as usual ! : )
All I can say is awesome . I'm glad to gave more insight to Will's state of mind and why he is the way he is. Being the elder brother, I thought he was the main breadwinner . Although I'm not excusing his behavior, I'm now getting a better understanding as to why he acts this way . Also that reference to Cletus, lol ,I loved it . I'm just curious as to why Will likes to punish Tom with the water (. I might've read it and need to go back ). In all of this I feel bad for Dennis .
So Tom has another , selfless side to him . Not that I didn't know it , but it's nice to see it . So sad to see that's he still has good in despite what he goes through . I know he chose to be an officer to help people . He's clearly frustrated by his situation . Booker needs to have more patience with him . As for Penhall going to join them it's gonna be awesome ! Tom Dennis and Doug are a great trio . Thumbs up .
This just keeps getting better . I love it ! And that Kung pow sounds really yummy , lol . Seriously Tom needs to find a way to stop Will , or ihe's going to be caught in a abusive cycle forever . Poor Tom . You've made Will my character to hate , he's needing help, so I'm not sure if I wanna see him ge what he deserves. Or what . He's very dangerous . Hopefully Dennis can help Tom .
First of all I knew it !! I freaking knew it !! I had a feeling there was more to Will and Tom's relationship that what they led on . Poor Tom ,he's not able to fight back because of the way will has him . I don't normally read incest , I'm kind of squeamish, but you wrote this tastefully. I like that. I also liked that interaction between Dennis and Tom, it was sweet . This chapter was on fire . So thumbs up ! Can't wait for the next chapter ! ;)
I was expecting a great chapter and you didn't disappoint ! This Tyrrell has me worried, and has me worried . I understand Tom's aversion to public nudity , I just wonder why he's afraid of water . Thumbs up :)