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for Cries of a Shadow

by OpenPage

schedule January 6, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I read the chapter and of course , it was good. I'm hoping Tyrell survives , only for Tom's sake . It would suck for him to go to jail for defending himself . As for Dennis , I'm sure it must be hard to be in the same place he was in with the guy that almost killed him. Thumbs up !

schedule October 13, 2019 at 12:00 AM

My heartfelt condolences , and send you love and hugs. 

All I have to say is another great chapter and thumbs up ! Tom came out of thst meeting confident and it was spoiled. I sure hope he comes out of that situation ok . 

schedule August 26, 2019 at 12:00 AM

This turned out to be one of my favorite chapters. You just can't help but fall in love with Dennis ! He possesses qualities of a true lover that everyone should have , he is selfless and caring with Tom and eases his fears.  Oh and that analogy you wrote about Tom emerging from his cocoon a pure butterfly , it was the best ! And yes , Dennis earned his halo ;)  

schedule July 10, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Well looks like Tom's therapy is coming along nicely ! With a little love and patience from Dennis I'm sure it will work. So happy they had their talk. I hope Tom can get pass his trauma and leave his past behind. Loved the chapter and looking forward to the next.

schedule May 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I have to admit , Tom's reluctance to talk to Dennis was what I expected , but it was making me think it was something more than just masturbating. Of course poor Tom went through a lot with his brother , so he probably thought it wasn't normal. Glad it looks like the conversation looks like it will be continued. Another great chapter.

schedule April 30, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Was kinda worried about Dennis and Tom , I thought they were going to fight , thanks to Dennis's sour mood. Glad it didn't come t thar. Glad Dennis was also supportive of Tom when he rold him of his plans. Loved the chapter. 

schedule April 2, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Just another great chapter as far as I'm concerned ! I'm happy Doug went by to talk to Tom. Doug finally had a chance to not only offer Tom another chance in something he loved , but to apologize for his treatment of him. 

schedule March 3, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Glad to see that Booker is doing ok , I was worried for a minute when Tom tried to ask how he was doing , but happy that they talked . Dennis did the right thing and Tom listened , Jacob is right they belong together . What did have me worried was Tom's question about if heaven and hell existing . He knows deep inside he'll never see will again . Thumbs up . 

schedule February 11, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Wow this was good ! To start off with Tom waiting for Dennis , and then to have Doug tell him he needed to go to the hospital . And what a beautiful scene between Dennis and Jacob , it made me wanna cry to have him give his blessing to Booker , pure love ! Loved the chapter and thumbs up 

schedule January 14, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Allright ! New chapter , and worth the wait. It seems like Dennis and tom are off to a good start , tbis makes me happy , but the ending. No !! I hope Booker gets help , damn Tyrell ! May he get caught ! Curse him ! I'll be wait for the next chapter . Thumbs up !