AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Take Two

by OpenPage

schedule February 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Loving this so far ! I think it's cute that Tom is so  bashful ,it's an attractive feature on him ,Dennis might like it too . Tom likes him ,so he should get  him some Dennis and enjoy the ride ! I was reading the love scene and thought Tom was gonna work  through his insecurities,but I guess not . I don't blame Dennis for being hurt and angry, I just hope he can give Tom a chance to explain. Hopefully. Thumbs up!! 

schedule February 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I thought I left a review for the first chapter, but I guess I didn't. Gave it another look to make sure. Anyway loved the part of Dennis in a mask ! Mmm something' about imagining him in a mask somehow intrigues me . A nice touch .  

Thumbs up !