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for The wrong night,the wrong man.

by ItwasMerlin

person Anonymous
schedule December 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

update soon?

person Ew
schedule November 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This sounds like rape you sicko

person just a fan
schedule November 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

woo that was hot once again . So Sid got some with his dream girl i like it , i also like the background story of the two it makes it more interesting . Cant wait to see what happens next . 

person alfakrull
schedule November 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Awesome story, hope you continue it!

person styuio
schedule November 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

As always, I liked it.

person red09
schedule October 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hey man its Bryan.

 

Did u get my story idea email? bryanpittman517

@gmail.com

person just a fan
schedule October 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I love how this story has started , Alexis is beyond hot and the fact you have put her paired with some looser makes this situation even better . Ive read your Chuck and Bones fic , and this one looks like it could be even better . 

im curious where your going with this , will it just be one night of fucking or will your oc get even more time with the hot red head. Please up date soon , i love your stories but you leave me hanging far to long sometimes . Not to rush you or anything:) 

person will30
schedule October 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Enjoying this, thank you. Anxious for the next chapter.

person styuio
schedule October 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hey, I liked the way this is going. Lucky person gets to have fun while he still does not know why is she being obedient. Now I'm curious the following when the drugs wear off.

person AvidReader
schedule October 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You've done it again Merlin, Bravo. Just don't forget about your Gaius fanfiction ok? I check just about everyday for updates to that story. I was really worried that it would go unfinished until you updated recently. Great job and keep up the good work!

PS: I've always had a great idea for a story involving Thea Queen from the show Arrow. You may not have seen it but it sets up a great situations that I know someone of your caliber could turn into something awesome. One example I thought of is a story where Malcolm Merlin, her father see's her passed out at a party around the age of 14, acting out because of her apparent brother and fathers death. Seeing a young boy about to rape her (or has already started) He steps in deciding that her first time should be special, with him. Another thing is that she gets mind controlled a lot, mostly by her own evil father. From magical tea's to actual mind control pills she is forced to do things and I couldn't help but wonder how many times she could have been raped by her own father wanting to impregnate her. This probably makes no sense if you haven't seen the show but I can't get the idea out of my head so I thought I would at least share it with an experienced writer. Last thought, in the most recent season, her father drugs her into living with him in a utopian bomb shelter, and because the show already uses infinte alternate reality's it is not only possible, but actually probable, that in one dimension he drugs her to become his wife and stay there with him. Again, makes no sense unless you watch the series but just a thought. My email is AvidReader2024@gmail.com if your interested in any other ideas for this or any story.