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for The wrong night,the wrong man.

by ItwasMerlin

person Wanon2015
schedule September 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hey, this is wanon2015.

i really enjoyed this chapter.

hope to see more soon!

person Winner
schedule September 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Kate tries to resist in vain,  both satisfy their pervert side. Alexis misses Sid and now those guys are going to blackmail her. i like this story more and more, congratulations.

person Anonymous
schedule September 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Awesome story

person Anonymous
schedule September 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Sid is turning Kate into his whore, waiting for the next chapter.

schedule June 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Chap7, great stuff, I loved what you did with Beckett.  He needs to have more fun with her.  I wish you would not shave every girl, but so be it.  Hope to read more soon.

person Anonymous
schedule June 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I like this story.

Please more of Sid hate-fucking Beckett. Also Beckett doesn't need to know that she can`t get pregnant from him. If Sid in adition forces her to abandon all otherr kinds of protection it could really triggfer Kates dark kink.

And / or if Sid compells her to actually fuck random strangers .in an bar or ally ...(then the drug wouldn't doi anything for her plesure and we will see if her dark desire can compensate ;))

But in anycase pls do keep writing.

person Ben
schedule June 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Liked the first chapters, but this chapter 7, LOVED it.

person WANON2015
schedule June 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hey merlin! this is awesome way to introduce kate in the story.

My only worry is that sid would go back being his usual normal after he calmed down or alexis finally told him that she didnt wants damien or alexis' jealously would drag into messy part.

I hope u guys have a wau to get sid and alexis doubled team kate up.

person Just a fan
schedule June 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Dam!  This story is good Merlin , your the king of unwillinging pleasure stories haha . So Sids met Kate , he has the drug surely he's going to use it on her aswell.  I like the way he actually loves Alexis but seems completely inept at reading that there's just nothing there . Although is there ? Maybe she's starting to feel something for her user . 

Please can we have more ? Not just this but your others aswell please 

person wanon2015
schedule June 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hey, its wanon.

i wish to hear more about 2-weeks course of sex but its okay. cant wait for chain reaction especially im hoping for kate will be involved late on.

r u going to have sid dramastically changed his personality once his mind-control goes out of control? like he no longer cares for their respectiveness except maybe for alexis?