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for The wrong night,the wrong man.

by ItwasMerlin

person AdonisAquarian
schedule July 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Great story .  Can't wait for the next chapter 

person Anonymous
schedule July 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM
schedule July 17, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Good to see chap 9.  I'm glad to hear you are moving away from the gangster storyline, can't happen fast enough for me.  Hope to see more updates on this and other stories soon.  Hopefully this will be more Kate/Sid/Alexis focused.  I want Sid to win, no `rescues'.

person Anonymous
schedule July 16, 2018 at 12:00 AM

 Good but would you make a story about Underworld Selene being blackmail by Kraven or Sonja blackmail by Tani? 

person Anonymous
schedule July 16, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I think Eric Doyle from Heroes would be perfect for this story.

schedule July 16, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I'm not one to reveiw on my own stories but for future reference if your going to reveiw can you do just that, if you want to leave me a request while i wouldnt promise anything, could you contact me via my email on my bio. Thanks 

Merlin

person Ben
schedule January 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Really wish there was more Kate being dominated by someone half her age, against her will, but still getting off on it.

person Anonymous
schedule October 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

 i would like Sid to meet characters from other series like Blue Bloods Det Maria Baez and Det Abigail Baker or Nicky Reagan-Boyle and Erin Reagan,Elementary Dr Joan Watson,the Mentalist Special Agent Teresa Lisbon,Sons of Anarchy Dr Tara Knowles and Gemma Teller Morrow Agent june Stahl,the Shield Agent Ollivia Murray or Corrine Mackey or Tina Hanlon and Catherine Durant,Hawaii Five-0 Kono Kalakaua.NCIS: Los Angeles Kensi Blye and NellJones.

person Anonymous
schedule October 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I would like to see more story this one.

person Spooks2b0
schedule September 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Really, REALLY enjoyed chapter 8. While I realize it may not be, would REALLY like to see Kate Beckett as Sid's whore, hating it, but truely enjoying it, while Sid has Alexis spray the drug on her dad so Sid and Kate can move into loft with Alexis and Rick...(farfetched, I know..but would solve a few problems for getting together). more than anything, tho, really like that Sid has Kate in his power and using her as a whore, with Kate liking it. Hope this plays out this way in the end...I can hope anyway.