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for The wrong night,the wrong man.

by ItwasMerlin

schedule May 11, 2025 at 12:00 AM

Hi bud been reading this story for a while and I'm thrilled there's a new chapter and I loved it especially with Sid now taking full ownership of Kate here is some suggestions for future chapters let me know what you think of them please thanks

 

kate alexis and Sid threesome

castle could be away on a book signing tour and Sid takes this chance to fuck Kate in her married bed at the loft and Sid could tell her stuff like admit it how does it feel to have a real man in this bed and stuff like that and also with this as an extra castle could phone Kate and this leads her and castle to have phone sex and the entire time it's on speaker whatever castle says he would do to Kate and wants her to do to him that is what she and Sid do

one idea is that Sid makes Kate put on her cop uniform from her academy days and he fucks her

kate could be at work in the precinct when she gets a text from Sid that says supply closet now and she and Sid fuck In the supply closet at the precinct

in one chapter later on to show that Sid has won and that Kate's he's now it could be Kate asked Sid to come to her apartment and she initiates it and they fuck

Let me know what you think of these

 

 

 

schedule May 11, 2025 at 12:00 AM

Hey stanakatic head to my pf . My email is there feel free to message.  Unable to really reply via reveiw and it'll probably get removed 

Thanks Merlin 

person TB
schedule April 4, 2025 at 12:00 AM

Really enjoying the story, I hope we'll see a Beckett Alexis threesome!!!

person will30
schedule March 15, 2025 at 12:00 AM

Eagerly awaiting next chapter

person Ant
schedule December 15, 2024 at 12:00 AM

Fantastic story. One of the best. Any chance of continuing along the Sid/Beckett line with more Beckett acts

person entropy
schedule November 9, 2024 at 12:00 AM

A solid story for a rarely-utilised character of Alexis, especially given the setup from the show with the angel costume! I had given up hope of any continuations so this is a surprise, hopefully there's a few more to come. The initial setup then splitting to the Alexis-blackmail and Beckett indulging in the more wild desires was excellent

It does seem like in this update you've seemingly put Alexis to the side to focus on Beckett, which story-wise makes sense. But it would be a shame if Alexis has been removed entirely from the story - if Sid has sent her away, perhaps after some time she ends up going back to Damien out of need or desire, given he's a loose end? Maybe she visits Jeremy in prison trying to get closure but doesn't realise she's under his influence as well?

person Ben
schedule June 12, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Still awaiting update.

person Kurtcobain111
schedule June 1, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Great story. Love the way you write Beckett. I hope you write more soon. This story has a lot of potential. 

schedule April 12, 2021 at 12:00 AM

When I realized that Alexis wasn't going to get banged by a bunch of frat boys and some scrawy ick boy was going to have a taste..... I stopped reading.  I guess other people like that she's being violated by a creep.  Personally I'd rather see her ravaged by studly frat guys who know how to fuck.  So once I saw that creepy boy was gonna get the benefit of the drug I stopped.... don't want to imagine that.

But I guess other people liked it.... so to each his own.  None for me thanks.

person Ben
schedule October 7, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Any chance of any update? Been a while.