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August 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Excellent concept, and some of this is very hot.
A couple of pieces of constructive feedback:
1. Build more heat and mood. Build the electricity.
2. Ainsley should become more turned on and want more. Instead, when the First Lady comes in, she's thinking, ok I've gone this far to get my support. It shouldn't be primarily about support anymore.
3. Less anal, more pussy.
4. This shouldn't be the first time for any of them.
5. You should avoid clincal and pure mechanical phrasing. I don't care precisely how long the dildo is or how "slightly" it tapers.