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Awesome story and awesome concept, the reviews are as good as the story! I think that it will be amazing just to see what story ideas people have. Might steal a few myself. How about showing some love for General Beckman. Old people like sex to! ;)

Since you are taking requests, how about this one - Scenario: Season 5 episode 1 has scene where Sarah and Morgan dance with each other. Sarah calls Morgan later on to commend him about his spy skills and presence of mind while handling the situation but Morgan uses the intersect to master the seduction/sex skills and fucks her everywhere in her house. -Kinks/sexual acts I want to see: Squirting, anal, anal and vaginal cream pies, analingus, cunnilingus, ass to mouth, ass to vagina.

This was very enjoyable. I think this type of story is where you're at your best. Off the top of my head, missing scenes from the show that could work: -Chuck & Sarah in the shower in S2. "Last moments before we die" sex. -Sarah & Manoosh in the interrogation room (on the bed where she is half-naked) -Morgan & Sarah in S3 in the kitchen (she comes to get orange juice wearing basically nothing) -S5 after her memory goes. Sarah wakes up and gives Chuck someone totally different (what she thinks all marks want, a complete slut) -S1 the night they are supposed to sleep together. Ellie's crisis never happens, so things have to escalate.

Keep it up.intrigued by the ideas above

In Phase Three, Sarah said she would do anything to find Chuck. Would that Thai Drug dude actually have asked Sarah to fight to find where Chuck was? Or would be want something else?

As sexual encounters between Chuck and Sarah go, this was a masterpiece. Absolutely spot on with how I would think Sarah and Chuck would be in that sort of situation and at that time in their relationship. Great to read something that shows Chuck the nerd in a "realistic" fashion rather than the sexual God that he is normally written as. And also very glad to read Sarah as the experienced half of the pairing who takes control and does what is required, albeit while handling issues of her own. You did credit to both of them! Thankyou! Some of the previous reviwers have some excellent ideas regarding future scenarios - I do hope you take some of them up :-)

If I remember correctly, in season 4, Sarah comments on what goes in an orgy. Maybe you can write a back story in which the whole CAT squad participates in an orgy. Just make the sex dirty and rough. - Another scenario, in season 1, Lester hits on Sarah, but instead of chickening out he actually fucks Sarah. - Quinn and Sarah, celebrating successful completion of a mission or maybe since he was Sarah's handler, he uses his position of authority to his advantage.

Great start to a hopeful collection to various one-shots. So well developed and written, very much true to the characters. Since I'm a Charah fan at heart most of my suggestions tie into the two of them together (plus others): Sarah after she loses her memories actually sleeps with Chuck (her mark) in the bedroom massage scene. Will sex bring her memories back? S and C have to go undercover at a fetish club or C really gets to learn what actual orgies look like. C and S's wedding night - all the details. A good Chuck/Sarah/Carina threesome - when it's good, it's so hot. What better that having your boyfriend and BFF together in bed? Chuck becomes an honorary member of the CATS - complete with (sexual) initiation.

A few more: After Chuck and Sarah get together, Chuck admits he's jealous having watched Sarah use her seduction skills to pick up marks like Cole over the years. So Sarah picks up "mark" Chuck in a hotel bar. Does the interest have sex skills? The world wants to know. Semi-retired from the spy life, Sarah still loves to act and roleplay (with Chuck and maybe others).

Bravo. That was simply excellent. The sex was hot and the feelings genuine. I'd like to see them have to spend a few nights in that bedroom. Maybe Chuck takes the lead next time and pays her back. :) Very well done.