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So more then likely chuck was watching the whole thing, who are they trying to break? Sarah or chuck? Some things ain't making sense. Surely Sarah is on some sort of birth control? She knew she was going on a mission where she was going to be fucking criminals, so she must of known somebody would end up cumming in her? Don't get me wrong the sex was hot, but your plot has more holes then a sieve

havent checked in for a while and get a treat with two chapters of your story . Very good and hot , you write really well . Love that Casey got his haha lucky guy , i can definelty see Chuck as having watched most of this , he wont be happy seeing his gf cumming undone on another mans cock now will he. Looking forward to more

Sorry, this isn't my favorite turn. Casey and Sarah together don't do it for me, especially them enjoying it. I was looking forward to the battle of wills. So color me disappointed. But it's your story and you should write it however you see. Thanks for the effort.

But Sarah is doing this to 'rescue' Chuck right? Please....lol You write her as attracted to any man that enters her vision

Sarah is cheating on Chuck no matter how you try to spin it, Casey/Sarah makes no sense, plot holes big enough to fly a plane through

Another searingly hot chapter. I for one really like the Casey/Sarah pairing so thank you for this! I hope there's a lot more chances for them to get together one way or another in your future chapters I liked that you included a lot from Casey's thoughts and point of view - very refreshing as usually its always from Sarah's point of view. I see that Chuck could be close! Please please don't rescue him too soon. There's so much potential here and so much that Sarah could be called on to do! Love that she finds herself enjoying these encounters and makes a great alternative to the boring vanilla Chuck sex I normally have to yawn through! Don't waste these opportunities by bringing Chuck back prematurely LOL! I'm not sure why Billings wanted Sarah and Casey to have sex but seriously, I don't care. That they had sex and it was written well is good enough for me :-) The plotline although pretty sparse, serves as a great vehicle for the main sexual events and this is how it should be - I've never yet watched a porn film for the logical storyline! I've actually read numerous Chuck fics where I regard the plotline to be more ridiculous and full of holes and OOC than this. And they never had any hot sex to redeem them! LOL. So...another brilliant chapter and I am so glad that you decided to "pick up a pen" and write this. Can't wait for the next instalment ! Roll on Chapter 4!

Nice chapter of why do I get the feeling of that chuck will see Sarah and casey fucking

Well, if they can see Chuck on their tv it stands to reason that he can see them...

I suspected that the mark would know Sarah was an agent. I'm surprised that he would tip her off so soon. It seems like Sarah playing the sex slave role to find Chuck is now pointless. It'll be interesting to see where this goes. Hot chapter.

That was a great second chapter. Can't wait for the next one.