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I for one am very very glad you decided to start writing. This has been one of the best "Chuck" erotic stories I have read. Its definitely a keeper! Hoping to read alot more of your work!

Great little fic .You were crucified a little by some people just because you didn't write there expectations. It's off putting no matter what you say . Hope you write more , he'll even a sequel. Keep it up

I think it was painfully obvious that you only cared about writing sex with Sarah. Given how half-ass the entire plot was, if you were actually trying the whole time that would not have been good. Next time if all you care about is getting Sarah with other men, then maybe write a bunch of unrelated chapters. At least that way you won't be insulting the readers by pretending to have a plot worth caring about.

Hope u write more stories like this. I for one enjoyed it and would love to see more of Sarah being a slut. You will never please every one so don't try. Just write what u want to write and what u enjoy. The amount of writer's in the chuck fandom is to few to lose one.

I enjoyed this story. I hope you write another one pretty soon. Maybe make Sarah get on with people like Jeff, Lester, Morgan, Manoosh, etc., losers who cannot get a hottie like Sarah.

Sarah's doing it for chuck excuse is a little played out. It's the same as merlins story. We all know she's doing it for her own pleasure but your both using the doing It for chuck excuse to justify her actions. Your plot is making no sense at all. I agree with the other reviewer who said it seems like it's a bunch of one shots but that's not what your trying to do. Have you intentionally made your characters ooc? Cause I don't know who this version of Sarah is. She's nothing like the strong woman we've come to know. And what's with Sarah cycling to see if the men are attractive before she basically lets them rape her? Just know of it makes sense.

Sorry. That was supposed to say what's with Sarah checking to see if the men are attractive before they basically rape her. Damn auto correct.

Your best chapter yet! I loved it. Writing style is well above average for a story such as this and I love well written smut! Yes, Sarah "doing it for Chuck" has been done before OMG! you must stop writing because it isn't an original idea thats never ever been done before! LMAO! The amount of Chuck stories I have read that just seem to be copies of each other! And yet they don't seem to attract the same amount of vitriol. The blackmail angle is great and its so damn hot that Sarah had to give up her ass for Chuck - Brilliant! Glad that she did get some enjoyment out of it though, despite her protests and that she found Billings handsome. - a nice touch that added to the storyline and made it more interesting. Perhaps next time she'll be forced to submit to someone ugly and repugnant? That would be HAWT! Or how about her taking Casey's monster cock in the butt? Damn, I'm getting all flustered just thinking about it! I think we can all agree that Sarah in your stories is OOC. Great now that we have that sorted, lets move on and get on with chapter 5 ! YAY! Can't wait. Keep it up MV007, I absolutely love this story and can't wait to see what you have in store next for our beautiful blonde heroine! As smut goes, this story is one of the best I've read. Well done!

That last chapter gave me nightmares.

Great bit of ass play there . Hot once more , I've got to think like the previous reviewer that Beckman could be in on this . Maybe Chuck hasn't seen anything but she'll hold it over Sarah so she'll do the ditty missions again