rate_review Reviews

I like the part about her birth control. I hope he knocks her up, and she uses it to infiltrate Patlovs organization. I really love Sarah stories where she is the cold hearted agent only alluded to in the series. There are not enough of those in my opinion. Keep writing Dark Sarah stories and I will always read and review them.

Iike where this is going... Hope to see Sarah in more stories without Chuck

Please keep this story going. It been fantastic thus far. Just a preference for me but I especially love the hetero stuff.

Nice to see anew update for this story.hope the next one will be here quicker next time

I really like the premise of this story, and truly hope it will be continued. I can't wait to read what happens next.

I'm loving this story. Please continue.

"..its porn dialogue so its supposed to be bad"

Just like everything you write?

What have you written alf?

I am loving this. I always like to see stories about pre-Chuck, unfaithful to Chuck, or just all around nympho slut Sarah. Is this going to be a long term story? I hope so. Maybe she gets the leverage she needs by sleeping with Pavlovs son, getting knocked up by him, and marrying him before she burns them. More please. Don't stop. I am not really a Charah fan so this type of story will always have an audience with me. : )

Nice continuation to the story although I would have personally preferred the switch had not happened. So Paltrov has found his girl eh? From the story, I would say thats probably Stephanie. You concentrated more on her and there were no highlights that would make Sarah stand out as "the one", to Paltrov or to me.
Please! This story's about Sarah! If she wasn't in it, I wouldn't read it, but always writing from Sarah's point of view means that we get loads of stuff about what she sees and what she thinks of the secondary characters and very little about Sarah herself ! I want to know what the secondary characters think of Sarah! - yes I know shes beautiful and there's only so many ways to say that before it starts to get repetitive, but you're the writer! Get creative!
Anyways! Thanks for your efforts so far! Its greatly appreciated and I look forward to the next installment !