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December 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8: I like Beth giving advice and Daryl's other ghosts haunting him. Great job.
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December 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
chapter 9: Oh I just loved this chapter. Daryl's thoughts and reactions are very realistic. Aaron means well but he just doesn't realize the extent of what Daryl's dealing with. Love the ending, it packed a punch.
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December 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
chapter 10: Yay! Happy for the guys.
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November 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
chapter 2: I like your take on Daryl. Enjoying the pace of this story. It's not rushed.
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November 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love the last lines of chapter 3. :)
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November 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, chapter four was intense. Nice work.
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November 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter. Daryl finally gets to share his secret. (5)
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November 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aw, man, there had better be a sequel to this! Very good read, thanks for a great story.
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November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
chapter 1: "Daryl had been through a lot of shit, but he never contemplated taking his own life. That just meant all the assholes won."
Love this line. Off to a great start.
Love this line. Off to a great start.