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for Beneath a Heart of Darkness

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person Vidalhbea
schedule November 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Tom . I can't imagine how he feels . I devoured ... I mean read this and my heart went out to not only Tom ,but Dennis . Booker must have felt so helpless ,not only that but , to have his friend respond to him like that . I don't think no one can blame Hanson for reacting like that . Sadly in a way he did participate , but unwilling . The ending was a welcome surprise for me . I knew Harold had it in him ! My hero . I hope he sticks around . So great chapter , well done ,bea.xx.
person Vidalhbea
schedule November 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
...damn ! I didn't like this one bit . ...I loved it ! I thought it was great . It conveyed so much emotion ,that I could tell how hard you worked on it . Poor Dennis trying to help Tom , but not being able to must have torn him apart . Surely it wasn't easy seeing the man he loves hurt in such a brutal way . I wonder if Dennis will be able to help Tom get through that traumatic event . Still having Tom in handcuffs is hot ,or would be under different circumstances . In other words BaHoD is my drug . I can't wait for my next fix . Huggles , bea.
person Vidalhbea
schedule November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This chapter ,much like a fine wine was well worth the wait ,and like a fine wine deserved to to be savored . Just when it looked like Dennis and Tom were getting along bam ! That scene with the handcuffs ,oh mama ! A fan girls dream come true . Too bad that it was under duress . Still hot though . And that McCarter...oooh , I hope he gets it in the end . Great chapter , eagerly waiting for the next . Huggles ,bea. ;)
person Vidalhbea
schedule October 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a treat to read . Tom sure did mess up . I can tell his heart is in the right place . He's just too compassionate for his own good . Dennis looks like he had to slap dome sense into Hanson . Those two have so much sexual tension , that even the birds in the story felt it . Tom may be confused , but I think he's falling for Dennis . Who can blame him ? So yes ,another well-written chapter. I loved the depth of emotions the two displayed . I'm glad Tom was honest when he talked to Booker . Until next ! Xx
person Vidalhbea
schedule October 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh , oh ,the plot sickens ! Tom and Dennis look like they are gonna be in a lot of trouble . Yikes ! I can wait to see what happens . Before I forget , wow Tom likes to fight in the nude ? Hmmm. I bet Dennis likes that . What a way for him it wake up . Lol. Or maybe Tom is a streaker and he didn't know it . Anyway I'm very interested in this Horshack fellow , he looks like he could be easy pickings . Poor guy. Great job on this chapter.
person Vidalhbea
schedule October 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Tom . That's really embarrassing to go through . Dennis sure scored some major brownie points . It was nice of him to help Tom when he needed it . Now he has a friend in Tom . Dennis proved himself to be a good person who showed compassion and kindness when he could've been a really big jerk and made fun of him. He was above that and helped Tom . Great chapter . Hmm mm can't wait for the fun to start .
person Vidalhbea
schedule October 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okay so I was reading this while listening to van Halen's
Jump . Really put me in the mood to enjoy it . Poor Tom , he should have let Dennis kiss his boo boo to make it better . Their interaction with each other was sweet , Tom expecting Dennis to make fun of him , but instead he showed concern towards the younger officer . My favorite part was when Tom flirted with Booker . Priceless ! I'm sure Dennis did Ole Cletus proud ! Also the tension between them was thick enough to cut with a knife . In other words this chapter kicked butt! I loved it. Next pwease!
person Anon
schedule October 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely loving this story so far. The friction between Hanson and Booker is brilliantly played out and I can almost picture the looks on their faces. I'm looking forward to seeing where you are going to take this story.
person Vidalhbea
schedule October 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting pretty good . Booker and Hanson have their work cut out for them.Of course , it doesn't help that Dennis is antagonizing Mcarter like that. I'm thinking he just couldn't help it . Sigh but look were it got him . On Tom's bad side . Oh uh. On the other hand they did a good thing for Harold. Mr.Horshack is like a sparrow among peacocks ,I like that comparison . Harold feels like he might be like Mosco. I hope he appreciates Dennis and Tommys help. My heroes !
person Vidalhbea
schedule September 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yet another chapter well done ! I like the light hearted humor in this chapter.I quest Dennis is gonna have to try harder than that to get a reaction out of Tom. Lol , he's too smart for Booker . Tommy was thinking with his head and not his fist.As for Dennis , he cracks me up. Going back to his room plastered . I can only imagine that goofy grin on his face! I kinda feel bad that he likes Tom ,who can blame him? Heh, he is beautiful . Officer Hansome-I mean Hanson is a cutie . Wondering how they'll start their day . Until next chapter . Huggles !