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for Beneath a Heart of Darkness

by OpenPage

person Anon
schedule February 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear about your mum. My condolences.

I love this fic, you have the characters down pat. I hope you continue with it.
person Vidalhbea
schedule February 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Once again another chapter well done . Glad to see Harold back . He's the man ! ; ) Hope whatever Booker us planning works .
person Alex Turner
schedule December 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just loving this story and so happy someone is still writing good 21 Jump Street fiction. Good timing as binge watched the series last week and wanted to find some stories that went in the direction my imagination was writing sequels. Now I am binge reading. Love how you've written the characters and hope you do keep updating as this is great. Thanks.
person Vidalhbea
schedule December 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter well done . Tom lashing out probably helped him . It looks like he's reacting to what happened to him . I truly hope all his attackers get what's coming to them . Have Dennis arrest them . Speaking of Dennis , he proved how level headed he can be . He was calm and collected during Tom's verbal attack . When he told him how Dennis wanted to get into his pants, and that he was just mad because it wasn't him having sex --I thought for sure that Dennis would retaliate . He did a great job diffusing Tom's anger . Again great job on the chapter . Huggles !
person Vidalhbea
schedule December 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Tom is an emotional mess . Well after what happened , who could blame him ? He seems pensive . Poor Tom , he's so distraught , he can't stand to touch himself to take a shower . I guess every reaction is different with rape victims . I'm glad Dennis showed up .I was expecting for Tom to throw him out , but was pleasantly surprised when he let him stay. Booker reacted quickly when Tom told him how he felt . Typical Dennis , but I'm glad to see that he used his common sense . I must say I was shocked that Tom had asked him to stay. Hmm he's cooking something up . Wonder what could it be ? I can't wait to find out . And if course ---great chapter .
person Vidalhbea
schedule December 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Seems like Tom is hanging by a thread . This chapter gives the reader a tiny look into poor Hanson's mind , and it's not pretty . I hope he gets the help (Booker) he needs . Alas I feel for Doug . He came in with the chocolates and flowers , it was nice of him . At least we know what happened to Dennis . He stuck to his guns for Tom. I think that shows true character . Not boring at all . Thumbs up .
person Vidalhbea
schedule December 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm listening to one of my favorite bands -Def Leopard's -pour some sugar on me ,and reading this latest chapter . All I can say is damm! Dennis is really in a bind . Stuck between duty and his loyalty to Tom . I don't envy him . I must say , I was surprised when Penhal just up and punched him .Dennis not doing anything was probably the best thing he could've done . All his going on and Tom seems to have lost his fight . I hope Dennis can bring it back . And that Doogie Houser refence ,I loved that show , used to watch it all the time . So another great chapter .
person Vidalhbea
schedule November 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It shows how much Dennis cares for Tom when he's willing to lie and trick him to get help . Of course it's so heartbreaking to see how bad it is . Dennis may have felt like a bad person , but he needed to deceive Tom in order to help him . Hanson being so traumatized , he wasn't in his right mind . The e m t witness a rare sight when they saw Dennis comfort Tom . This chapter was poignant and I just love how far Dennis was willing to go for Tom . It showed how much he cares . Thumbs up . And already waiting for the next chapter .
person Vidalhbea
schedule November 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Have I said how much this is like a drug to me ? Clearly this chapter is so good , it had me going stupid . And I love it! Harold is the man of the hour . When I think of him , I think of the song "I need a hero . " HE IS QUICKLY BECOMING MY FAVORITE . I like that he decided to stand up for himself , even up to Booker . Wow ,Mr.Horshack grew a pair , and what pair. The interaction between the three of them is heartfelt . Dennis struggling with Tom shows a new side to him . A vindictive side I'm not sure what to think of . But I understand the need to want to help Hanson . I'm not sure if he should trick Tom into going to the hospital , then again he knows what he's doing . Until next time ,can't wait for my fix , xx.
person Vidalhbea
schedule November 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm giving this baby two reviews ! Two reviews and two thumbs up . I think Harold should bring SEXY back . Yeah . That's the kind of stuff that keeps me coming back . Huggles ! !