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for Beneath a Heart of Darkness

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schedule July 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This was so worth  the wait ! It's kind of sad for Tom to leave the force , but it's for the best . I'm also happy that Doug talk  to Dennis and in his own   Penhal  way clear the air with Dennis  . It was funny at the end when Doug remarks that he still thought Dennis  an ass hole.  Booker  took in stride and was ok with it . 

And the love scene  between Tom and Dennis was beautiful  . Dennis  showed both patience and  love . Dennis showed Tom he was his everything.  Love it ! :))

schedule July 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm both happy and sad ! This is  such a great story from start to finish  . Finally Harold came into his own and followed his own path ,not caring what his father thought  . I'm especially happy for  Jorge,  my favorite character  , he got the love he was looking for  , and last but not least my two faves . Dennis and  Tom , they worked hard for their own happiness  , and  they deserve  to be happy . Tom working to be a rape counselor is a good decision  . Again a great story  . Thumbs up!  :)

schedule May 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Love this chapter. It's good to see Tom finally healing after his assault and ready to move on,but it's kinda sad that he quit the force . It's not fair ,but with his inability to trust people, he could be a danger to others and himself  . Dennis got some major brownie points  ! Even though he really wants to take their relationship to the next level , he cares enough about Tom to make sure he's ready . I just loved how he was honest and told Tom he was afraid of hurting him . It makes me wanna have a Dennis of my own . (Sigh)  And really hoping the pi taus get what they deserve.   Can't wait for the next chapter.  : ) 

schedule May 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh the foolish things our hearts make us do sometimes  . Hanson believed he  was ready to seduce Dennis  , but he went about it the wrong way . Poor Tom . At least Booker stopped him from making a huge mistake and possibly ruining their relationship  . Although I admit it would've  been hot to see them reenact the shower scene Dennis had with Jorge.  But Dennis showed how much he loves Tom by not letting anything happen  .  Your usual  , as always the best and two thumbs up  ! ; )

schedule April 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This chapter was worth waiting for.  Glad to see Tom had enough time to clear his mind,  and realize that his mistake . DennisTom sounds much better than DennisJorge  I think . It acually broke my heart when Tom viewed the tape of Dennis and Jorge  , I felt  bad  . I know it hurt him to see them together  , but I'm glad he came to his senses.  I'm happy Tom knows that Dennis wants him and not Jorge  , that they simply were manipulated  . Thank God for sesame Street  ! (I used  to watch it all the time ) answer Now you have my curiosity piqued  and wondering what Tom will do . Great chapter, loved it . Let's see what Tom is gonna do . 

schedule April 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is getting out of control  ! That Holland is getting his way  ,and without doing anything  ! Boo . I just love this ! Keeps getting better with each chapter  . Tom should know Dennis did the right thing by calling Fuller , he may not like it , but it was the right thing to do . Now as for Dennis confession,  damn ! He did the right thing also .  Poor Tom  . But he would've  found out eventually  . Hope they work it out  , they just have to!  On a side note poor caddy  ,it wasn't necessary for Dennis  to abuse it .  : (( thumbs up 

schedule April 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I just love this story  ! Holland is finally gonna  get his . I hope lupita can help Tom and Dennis  . Glad to see he (Holland)lost some of his smug attitude.  It was  high time somebody put him in his place  , or knock him down a peg as Tom did . Good for him ! I kinda panicked when Dennis had his anxiety attack, but he pulled through just fine . Yes another great chapter,  and thumbs up! 

schedule March 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Alll I can say is I loved it ! I just loved  the interaction between Dennis and Doug,those two are something else ! Lol. They may not like each other ,but they love Tom enough to put aside their differences . Also glad to see Dennis giving Tom the support he needs ,clearly he loves him if he's willing let Doug support him too . Two thumbs up! 

schedule February 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Alright ! Tommy's getting ready to kick some butt ! Holland and crew won't know what hit them . I don't know why  , but I was expecting the pi tau to visit him . But instead it was Fuller . Coach showed heart and he's awesome for that . He's the right man for Tommy to talk to . You also give Fuller class . I'm happy  that he was accepting of  Tom and Dennis's relationship. Great chapter and of course thumbs up!

person Vidalhbea
schedule January 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm so glad to see Tom getting back to normal  , and I know he's got a ways to go . Even if he's not one hundred percent better , he's trying to overcome his trauma , Dennis is his rock and I'm glad . It looks like both might have s happy ending . The love scene between Tom and Dennis was sweet and sensual at the same time and I adore Booker for his patience with Tom . It was a sign of love and selflessness . So yes. , a great chapter written and of course two thumbs up!