I don't know if you're still active and read these reviews, but I just wanted to say that this story was a work of art. You did so wonderfully in capturing these character's personalities and emotions. You made it to where the switches in P.O.V. were not awkward at all and it was overall a very easy format to read. I like how you made the story last long enough, but not too long to lose attention. Speaking of attention, you had it the entire time. There wasn't a dull moment at all. Even the ending, which was sad to come, was very nice. It didn't leave me unsatisfied or without closure and it was very realistic for a Creepypasta involved story. Overall, I loved it and will be recommending it to my friends and family who are also obsessed with Creepypastas, particularly Jeff the Killer.
Omg that was amazing I loved the ending
Are you going to do a sequel? What Jeff says at the end makes it seem like it.