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for Phoebe's Black Day

by JayDee

person Jon
schedule April 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great read. I love how you added Amy Green into the story. Any chance you will expand the story with the rest of the ladies? Sort of like Phoebe's sister finds her and talks her into a little payback against the girls for leaving her in her time of need? If not, still a great read. And being able to hear her voice through it all.
person john
schedule September 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a rip off of the story "What a rapper wants, a rapist gets." You changed some of the names, but most of it is the exact same.