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Love this story. Have read this author at other sites and love all of their works. Would love more Gibbs/McGee. Would love to see maybe a child adopted or through surrogate, I think it will be a little fun to watch these two become fathers. But please don't forget the sex I can't help it, I really love the smuttier the better.

Yeah... Gibbs Dom voice is something. Wouldn't mind being commanded by that voice. Amazing chapter, loved the hot McGibbs activities and the trust between the two. The fact that Gibbs was hesitant about telling Tim and afraid that he would judge him but still taking the chance and revealing his fantasy shows how much he cares and trusts Tim. Also that Tim would trust Gibbs enough to know he wouldn't do more than Tim could handle and wouldn't hurt him shows the amount of trust he has for Gibbs.

Just a fantastic chapter like always. Missed reading this story, hope to read more from you soon. Thank you for sharing!!

Yeah so DomTim is hot. SubGibbs is hot! Everything they did is hot. Your story has got me all hot and bothered. Tim embracing his Dom self and being there when Gibbs was struggling with his Sub persona was just great. Reading about Gibbs slowing embracing being a Sub and know his Dom was there for him and cared about him was amazing.

I thank you again for updating this fantastic story. Also I support your "never ending story of kink." It should NEVER end!! lol

Aw Jimmy, you did such an awesome job!!

Great chapter. Loved that you brought Jimmy into the mix and Tim and Gibbs was able to help him overcome his nervousness about being with strangers. So totally hot with the glory hole (which this is the first story I've read with a glory hole.) and Jimmy satisfying all three men all by his little lonesome. Having Gibbs watch Tim with Jimmy was just icing on the cake.

Once again, awesome chapter, very hot!! Excited to read more. Thanks for updating!!

Gibbs releasing his aggression and Tims vulnerability in this chapter is just so amazingly erotic. Gibbs being able to help Tim with his fsntasies and Tim in turn allowing Gibbs to have this moment to work through some of his own feelings and demons is just fantastic. At times Gibbs was in danger of overstepping that line into total aggressiveness but in the end his love and caring for Tim overpowered those thoughts and kept him in line. Also that was a very interesting way to share a hobby (ie handtools, woodworking) with ones partner!! lol ;-)

I thank you for sharing this sizziling chapter and I can't wait to read more.

Well damn... that was just freaking HOT!! First off you have Tim being somewhat a Dom with Jimmy by being all commanding with him which a commanding Tim is everything. Second he hear about Gibbs starting out as a Sub and would be willing to sub for Tim when he's ready to be a good Dom. Then we get a glimpse of his next desire which to me is totally hot. Rape fantasy is such a taboo subject but with consenting adults it could be very erotic and enjoyable. Lastly having both of them please themselves in front of the other while controlling what the other does was just fantastic!! Your writing has me feeling all types of ways! lol

Thank you for giving us readers another insight into the relationship between these two. The next chapter can't come soon enough!!

Amazing!! This is the first story that I've read where Tim is involved in a DP that he is the recipient of. I love it, just wish there were more out there to read. To have a Dom like Gibbs who cares enough to help him overcome all his negative issues about himself and his sexually desires is fantastic. Then to have a second Dom to help which in the end will help another sub deal with his own issues is just awesome. Excited to read when Jimmy makes an appearance. Love all the hot sexy times in this story but I'm becoming addicted to all the sweet moments of Gibbs caring for and taking care of his boy. Kinda feel sorry for Tony though. He missed out on some HOT action, all because of Tims talented mouth.

Thank you for writing the amazing scene. You've definitely made this girl VERY happy! Also thanks for sharing!

Even when they're doing preparations it freaking hot!! Also Gibbs plus a dildo is VERY hot.

Thanks once again for updating this story. Great writing as always. Can't tell you how excited I am to read the next chapter! lol ;-)

Really loving all this HOT McGibbs action! Not only are we getting sexy times but there is also love mixed in. Gibbs bringing out all of Tims sexual desires and fantasies will make Tim a much happier and healthy person. Plus Gibbs is benefiting from it too. I vote for Gibbs to always have a filthy mouth. lol

Thanks for updating. Eagerly waiting to see what happens next for our favorite duo.

Great start to Chrysalis! Love me some McTibbs but I'm a McGibbs girl to the core. Really enjoying the fact that this seems to be more than sex with Gibbs with the way he was so caring with Tim and how angry he was with Tony for not being able to last so Tim could have his fantasy longer. I feel bad for Tony though, because who could resist Tims talented mouth with his full lips. lol

Any who, amazing start and VERY excited to read more from you. Also loved how descriptive you were with your story. Thanks for sharing!