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pretty good yo

Enjoyed the chapter. Lots of hot sex. Sarah trusting Chuck enough to allow him control is huge. Maybe it's time for him to blurt out an ILY and freak her out. :) Keep up the good work.

So glad you updated. A lot of sex, you write it well but it's key to character growth of sarah.

Thank you for coming back and posting another great chapter. I don't read the other reviews so I don't know what they are saying. Please ignore and continue. I may self am guilty of posting harsh reviews on other stories, but then realized if I don't like it then I need to shut up and stop reading. You can't please everyone. But you are pleasing me with this story! Thank you!

Excellent chapter. The smut was hot the plot progression was nice. They really seem to be connecting on all levels now, nice to see Sarah so willing to move forward with chuck. Hope you continue with your writing, as your stories are the only ones I read on this site.

Enjoying your story, the plot and the naughty bits.

Please do not give up on this story. Please do not let the trolls win! As an author you put in a ton of time and effort into “YOUR” story for nothing more the pride. Tell “YOUR” story, “YOUR” way and if the trolls do not like it, they can find a different story to read. Personally, I’m enjoying your AU story on Chuck and Sarah and I’m looking forward to your next Chapter.

Well, I liked it. And continue to enjoy the story thoroughly. I'll have to be more mindful of my reviewing since my laziness is somehow being used against you! I don't mind the approach a bit that Chuck was a willing participant (less than the reader was aware) in "the game" in a story called "Just a Game". He has been all along, right? I accept that he was smart enough to know what she was doing, that she was playing a teasing game more than truly interrogating (since she fully intended to put out), and he had the "confession" in mind (as later explained). Maybe it was a "fix" but I actually don't think you CHANGED that as a reaction to reviews (or need it) but rather may have emphasized it more than you may have planned. But neither do I think you have to explain yourself no matter what the case. Either way, I "suggest" (irony acknowledged) that you now ignore all "suggestions" from reviews. Since (if you did modify or add an explanation) it is met with ridicule rather than appreciation. Clearly you can't win with the vocal readers who live to be wet blankets so F them. And (on the topic of wet blankets) this is the second time I've seen a commenter in this fandom (under different names) claim to have analytical insight into "declines in hits". Who has so little of a life that they monitor something like that? How would they even have the data available to make that claim unless they personally kept a DAILY check sheet? Rather than accepting the claim, fellow readers, consider the behavior here and draw your own conclusions folks! Keep on with your excellent story! I support this fandom and those who actually share their work and creativity.

I love this story. It's by far the best one on this Chuck site. The sex is hot but I'm really enjoying the relationship development and the plot too. Don't listen to the haters. You're an excellent writer, and they're just unhappy trolls. Please keep going!

You know how critical I've been of certain parts of your story, but I say all that and still enjoy the story as a whole. So let me be the first to tell you that "ha"'s review makes no sense at all. There's nothing wrong with your Author's Notes, you're free to explain yourself and/or your direction of the story before you begin your chapters. The alternative is to post replies to reviews, and that's against the rules. So.... I will say that I found it hilarious how you tried to explain away Sarah using sex as an interrogation tactic (that Chuck 'wanted' to tell her and was in control). I think that's a load of BS and people are always more willing to open up to a person during sex, and are clearly more distracted and less aware of what they're saying. The knowledge that Chuck 'wanted' to tell her after they had sex, looks like the writer trying to explain himself/herself rather than the characters acting naturally. So those parts of this chapter made me laugh, because I could tell it was only there because of what a few of us said about Sarah's actions. I mention it, but it doesn't "ruin" the story for me, I just found it funny. The problem I had with it in chapter 20 was that it was immature and manipulative by Sarah. At some point she needs to trust him, her actions of questioning Chuck during sex, isn't showing that at all. The sex was good this chapter, as was the more emotional moments from Sarah like I mentioned before. I personally hope you don't get too tied down to the 'case' element in this story, it's good to have it going on in the background, but I hope you don't let it dominate everything else that goes on in the story. It's been used well to get Chuck and Sarah closer together though, it has certainly helped in that way. I'm not sure where you're going from here but is Carina going to meet Chuck finally? This whole case must be drawing Carina to check up on Sarah sometime in the future, and given Sarah's current dependency on Chuck that seems to be growing, this could make an interesting first impression...much like how Sarah met Ellie haha. Anyway, overall the story is great. There's been a few WTF moments, but you're writing is excellent.