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May 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
really impressed with this story. there's so much more going on than just smut. although the smut is really erotic and a total turn on. well done!
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May 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Are you planning to have Carina make an appearance in this story?
Chapter was pretty good, they should be involved in more public sex!
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May 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
not sure I like the direction as much anymore. it's almost TOO romantic? like now she's all sappy and stuff and that seems really out of character for sarah.
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May 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Now thats a way to end a "first date." Thank you!
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May 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Awesome as usual. Happy they went on a date, even if it didn't last long cause they couldn't control themselves haha. It's nice to see Sarah changing into a woman who wants that safety and feeling of home from a relationship. The car sex was pretty hot too. Look forward to whatever you write next. Hope you update soon.
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May 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I really hope the trolls who apparently read your story but still like to pretend they wont continue but still come back and read it anyways aren't causing you to push this story to the side. It seems like there are still a lot of us reading and liking it. Just wanted to come on and give you my support. Everything about it is just so enjoyable. The plot as well as the sex. I'm interested to see how this Fulcrum thing goes too. Thanks MCP!
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May 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING! Definitely about to turn on that music and read the chapter over again with it playing! Thanks for updating!
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May 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Loving it! Thanks for keeping this story (and their relationship) progressing with regular doses of smut!
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May 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
so refreshing to have a story on here that's just Chuck and Sarah. dont want to insult other stories on here obviously. but it's just really nice to sit down and read a long epic story about Chuck and Sarah falling in love as they have delicious dirty sex. so thanks for this. really. some of us ARENT bored and think you're an awesome amazing writer!
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May 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I'm bored now. Do you write anything else? Read some other stories to get ideas maybe.