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Hope you post a new chapter soon. Check every day for a new post to this story. I'm curious to see what Chuck decides because like I said I think he should decide to do the fuck buddy thing and close himself off emotionally to Sarah. It could give you a chance to write more hot dirty sex for awhile, which your stories always have a degree of love making involved, and then have Sarah want more intimacy but she has to convince Chuck she made a mistake.

Also I read a review saying maybe she sees Chuck out on a date with another woman, or even just sees someone flirting with him and him flirting back. You honestly have a lot of possibilities with this story. There aren't many stories I've read where Sarah needs to win Chuck's affection, and I'm looking forward to that if that's the direction you decide to go with this.

Update soon please!

I agree with one of the other Anon reviewers. You had Sarah backtrack a lot in this chapter and it did come off a little strange because we didn't see this attitude at all really in chapter 2. I'm not really sure what else you were supposed to do though. Yeah this should have happened much sooner, but I like the place Sarah is in now much better.

I hope that Chuck eventually closes himself off. It's understandable for him to be like this now because he's Chuck but if he's pining over her the entire story instead of learning to deal, it makes the narrative a little less impactful. I guess I just wouldn't care as much if she's only fighting her own feelings as opposed to that AND trying to convince Chuck that she was wrong and he should give them another chance.

Like the way this is going. Think you should have chuck agree to be her buddy. But it's Sarah that starts to develop really strong feelings for him. Maybe she catches him on a date one night with another woman, and she starts with o show him that she wants more then sex from him without acknowledging her real feelings. Great start so far though

This is real good stuff, son. And I ain't even a fan of first-person.

Chapter 2, more good shit!

Daaaaaaamn. So. Here's the deal. I wanted to read some Chuck smut, and then you go and drop a good fuckin' story on me. Like, legit. Here's the deal. I'm a hopeless romantic and I love romantic and sweet Chuck and Sarah stories. And this is that.

And now we got a little drama. Sarah wants to keep it casual, Chuck wants a girlfriend. Neither is wrong. But I love this story. Thank you for writing it.

This last chapter was kind of weird, because you made it seem like Sarah felt more for Chuck in the first 2 chapters than what she was saying she wanted in chapter 3. It seems clear to me that Chuck would be confused by that, they can't possibly be fuck buddies with the confusion between them, it won't work at all. Interesting to see if you have Sarah hook up with someone else and realize it's Chuck that is appealing, not just the sex...I hope you don't have her hook up with others, but I can see that being the case.

Another great chapter! Hope you have Chuck agree to just being fuck buddies and actually is able to do it without developing too strong of feelings for Sarah. And its Sarah that starts to fall for Chuck. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh man, she's sooooooo gonna regret this conversation later.

Hell, I think she started to regret it mid-discussion.

Because he's going to deliberately close himself off (because he can't possibly turn this down even if it's not everything he wants, right? And you have a porn quota to fill...) but she won't be able to help seeing what a great guy he is but she's established herself as the girl who is only looking for a fuck buddy. Oops.

So what happens the first time a Hannah/Lou-like character asks him if he's seeing anyone? Or if he and Sarah are serious? Or if she asks Sarah?!

Will he try to "win her over" or just go along with her rules? Will she see him out basically being Chuck without her and wish she was included?

This story just got even more interesting...(and it was already really good)

Completely agree with last anon reviewer.

I think you should have Chuck close himself off to her and play it the way he thinks she wants to (because you know he's not going to pass something like this up). And when Sarah starts developing deeper feelings, because you know she already has them, she's going to have a hard time getting past his defenses because he doesn't want to open himself up emotionally if he thinks she's never going to feel that way about him.

And then like anon said what happens when another girl realizes Chuck is a great guy and wants something with him that he doesn't think Sarah does. She has dug herself in a hole if she does end up wanting a relationship because at the back of Chucks mind he'll always be thinking she's not serious about him.

Looking forward to a lot more hot sex between them but you've also opened up the possibility of there being a lot of plot and character development in this story. I love it!

Also if you ever want to add more to Camcorder just know you've always got a reader in me for that story. It's my favorite on here with this story a close second.