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lots of hot sex so far, but i think it could still be a bit kinkier. not sure what happened to sarah, in the first 2 chapters she seems to have fallen head over heels for chuck, in and out or the bedroom. but after that she pretends like she doesnt feel anything. thats ok shes just deluding herself with that, but maybe you shouldnt have wrote her feelings so strong in the first couple of chapters. not surprised chuck was a bit confused by her fuck buddy request, cause it seemed at first like there was a possibility of a relationship there by the way she was acting. like the idea of her maybe seeing chuck with another woman, but i especially like the idea of the carina sarah conversation that somebody mentioned, where carina fucks chuck and brags about how good he was and sarah getting jealous, that could work good in this plot i think. also what does chuck do for a job? hope he doesnt work at the buymore in this story.

Reading through this again, I can definitely see a scene in the future where Sarah and carina are talking, and carina telling Sarah about the latest guy she fucked one night called chuck. Saying how great he was in bed and how she has to have another go of him. Sarah realising it can't be a coincidence starts sorting out her feelings for him before it's too late, and she's insanely jealous. Maybe she fucks someone else, and realises that the reason the whole fuck buddy thing was working out, wasn't only due to the great sex but because of chuck and her feelings. There is nowhere near enough stories where it's Sarah chasing chuck and pushing for a relationship, it's usually always chuck doing the chasing. I thought in season 3 Sarah should of been doing the chasing, especially after the lack of trust of chucks character and the whole red test situation. Can't wait for the next update

Loved the update. Glad you had Chuck agree to the arrangement. I'm curious to see who develops the feelings first. Or rather who wants to act on the feelings that are clearly already there for both of them. Like I said before I'm hoping you have Sarah wanting to start an actual relationship, but she has to convince Chuck because he is being cautious so he doesn't get hurt. There aren't enough stories where Sarah needs to chase Chuck, which is what I thought should have happened in season three because with the stuff Chuck had to put up with I think it would have been more believable if Sarah had to win him back.

But anyway that is my hope for this story. There aren't many adult chuck stories where I'm invested in the plot because there usually isn't one, but I like how this story has a plot, and a believable one at that. I can see versions of Chuck and Sarah in different jobs where this happens.

Can't wait for the next update!

Really glad you updated this story! I was afraid you had dropped it, it would have been a shame. As always, the writing is great. Keep up the good work (= pretty please, update soon!)

Damn that chapter was hot. Glad you continued with this. Also glad that chuck decided on the whole fuck buddy thing. I have a feeling its not all gonna be orgasms and great sex though, got a feeling there is gonna be some angst in there somewhere. I can't wait. Hope you update quickly.

just waiting for it to all fall apart again properly, and boy do I hope it is Sarah that realizes she wants more

Hey MCP. I still check this story for updates almost daily. And I've been really wanting to leave a review to let you know your readers are still interested but didn't want to seem like I was rushing you or something so I figured I'd wait until it had been a month since you'd updated. I think technically a month is tomorrow but oh well. So yeah just wanted to let you know there are readers interested in this story and just hoping there are more update coming.

Wow this is an awesome story so far. Very interested to see how Chuck responds. Like a couple other reviewers said, it would be interesting to see Chuck be the closed off one because he doesn't want to develope any further feelings for her, but what guy would pass up this arrangement with Sarah right? And then Sarah is the one who needs to pursue Chuck when she developed feelings for him. And I think she is just fooling herself because it's clear she already has at least some feelings for him.

Noticed your first three updates were made pretty soon after each other and it's been almost a month since your last update. Just hope you haven't given up on the story. Looking forward to the next update.

really hope you continue with this story and update soon please

will you be updating this story soon?