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July 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just read this story from start to finish and i must say a confident Chuck is a sexy Chuck. The sex whilst hot is tastefully written and it seems they like each other a lot. But Sarah you need to sort your feelings out girl cause you will end up losing him i think if you don't. Lovely story so far, Cant wait to read more.
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July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Sex was hot as usual. Thanks for the update
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July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying your story! Thank you!
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July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I haven't even read the new chapter yet, but I'm so happy you updated this story I couldn't wait to review! It's gonna be a nice evening reading the story from the beginning all over again. Thanks you!
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July 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chapter, and love this story. Hopefully we won't have to wait as long for the next update but I understand life happens. Can't wait for more!
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July 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
love the chapter, Sarah seems to be a pretty selfish lover but it's extremely well written.
A little weird for her to be thinking about bryce/past boyfriends whilst with Chuck too, dunno maybe just me
Thanks for the update!
A little weird for her to be thinking about bryce/past boyfriends whilst with Chuck too, dunno maybe just me
Thanks for the update!
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July 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love to see an update soon. So eager to see where you go with this.
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July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
One of the things I find so interesting about this story is how you’ve allowed Sarah and Carina to be something that so many women deride men for doing. You’ve allowed them to be female versions of fuckboys – players, lacking in emotion and motivation for commitment, focused primarily on no-strings sexual self-gratification.
This fits a part of Sarah’s character who is afraid of emotion and commitment and has some issues with men. Sure, in many ways this is also not Sarah, but Carina has convinced her she can be a taker and satisfy her needs devoid of any emotion beyond lust.
In this story so far, Sarah is taking from Chuck more than she is giving. And that’s OK. Women should be able to do that too. As long as the other person is willing we should be able to take what we want. Only if they're willing.
It is an unfortunate truth that many women deny this occurs and climb onto a moral pedestal when confronted with it. When the reality is that what is happening here is actually very prevalent in modern society. Men don’t hold a monopoly on this sort of behavior, not even close.
The next time you are in a bar, pay close attention to the women. You’ll see them eyeing the perceived trophy males just as much, assessing the potential, passing judgement. It’s an undeniable fact of modern society and the human condition. Women are primarily the ones making the choice.
I’m not saying there is anything really wrong with this either; on either side of the fence we tend to build between the sexes. Sex shouldn’t be a dirty word or a forbidden act in the absence of love. People shouldn’t feel inhibited to explore that side of themselves if the desire, trust, and attraction are there.
Society constantly tries to deny it, but sometimes great things come from it. Friendship. Love. Commitment. Born from what may have intended to be a one-night stand… or an unspoken ‘fuck buddy’ arrangement.
Unfortunately, in this case Sarah is attempting to make her and Chuck’s arrangement spoken and contractual. She’s set it out for him to see. Chuck may be going along with it right now, but that’s not really Chuck. If Chuck is true to character, it should be bothering him to be held at arm’s length this way.
I have a strong feeling that Sarah is denying something by making Chuck her fuck buddy like this; something that could be making what Chuck and her are doing much more special – her emotions. By sticking to her fuck buddy guns and saying her intentions out loud she might be causing serious harm to their budding trust and damaging their potential relationship – total trust that needs to be present for really mind-bowing sex.
Because trying to stifle her emotions is preventing Sarah from giving as strongly as she takes. And if I were Chuck, I’d be wondering about the potential personal fallout I’d incur from my fuckgirl finally getting bored and moving on.
Can something greater come from this situation? It can. It is, after all, Chuck and Sarah.
They can both try to accept and deny all they want, put the wild sex in a bubble. But sooner or later, if these two are true to character, they are going to come crashing together in a deeper way. And then the wild sex will become even wilder when they both feel like they can completely let go.
So, kudos to the author for admitting an undeniable truth and delving into it through their story. I'm curious where it will lead.
This fits a part of Sarah’s character who is afraid of emotion and commitment and has some issues with men. Sure, in many ways this is also not Sarah, but Carina has convinced her she can be a taker and satisfy her needs devoid of any emotion beyond lust.
In this story so far, Sarah is taking from Chuck more than she is giving. And that’s OK. Women should be able to do that too. As long as the other person is willing we should be able to take what we want. Only if they're willing.
It is an unfortunate truth that many women deny this occurs and climb onto a moral pedestal when confronted with it. When the reality is that what is happening here is actually very prevalent in modern society. Men don’t hold a monopoly on this sort of behavior, not even close.
The next time you are in a bar, pay close attention to the women. You’ll see them eyeing the perceived trophy males just as much, assessing the potential, passing judgement. It’s an undeniable fact of modern society and the human condition. Women are primarily the ones making the choice.
I’m not saying there is anything really wrong with this either; on either side of the fence we tend to build between the sexes. Sex shouldn’t be a dirty word or a forbidden act in the absence of love. People shouldn’t feel inhibited to explore that side of themselves if the desire, trust, and attraction are there.
Society constantly tries to deny it, but sometimes great things come from it. Friendship. Love. Commitment. Born from what may have intended to be a one-night stand… or an unspoken ‘fuck buddy’ arrangement.
Unfortunately, in this case Sarah is attempting to make her and Chuck’s arrangement spoken and contractual. She’s set it out for him to see. Chuck may be going along with it right now, but that’s not really Chuck. If Chuck is true to character, it should be bothering him to be held at arm’s length this way.
I have a strong feeling that Sarah is denying something by making Chuck her fuck buddy like this; something that could be making what Chuck and her are doing much more special – her emotions. By sticking to her fuck buddy guns and saying her intentions out loud she might be causing serious harm to their budding trust and damaging their potential relationship – total trust that needs to be present for really mind-bowing sex.
Because trying to stifle her emotions is preventing Sarah from giving as strongly as she takes. And if I were Chuck, I’d be wondering about the potential personal fallout I’d incur from my fuckgirl finally getting bored and moving on.
Can something greater come from this situation? It can. It is, after all, Chuck and Sarah.
They can both try to accept and deny all they want, put the wild sex in a bubble. But sooner or later, if these two are true to character, they are going to come crashing together in a deeper way. And then the wild sex will become even wilder when they both feel like they can completely let go.
So, kudos to the author for admitting an undeniable truth and delving into it through their story. I'm curious where it will lead.
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July 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
would love to see an update soon.
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July 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hoping for an update so one. I love this story!