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September 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter as usual, absolutely love your writing, very few authors do Charah better. Can't wait for more!
P.S.
I apologize on behalf of us who just want to read your story about the fact that the reviews have become a forum post of arguments, hope it doesn't deter you from writing.
P.S.
I apologize on behalf of us who just want to read your story about the fact that the reviews have become a forum post of arguments, hope it doesn't deter you from writing.
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September 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating!
Still doing a very good job with this story. I like the way the more Sarah gets to know the real Chuck, the kinkier she gets in the bedroom. It shows trust leads to good sex! I know, I'm a hopeless romantic :)
Still doing a very good job with this story. I like the way the more Sarah gets to know the real Chuck, the kinkier she gets in the bedroom. It shows trust leads to good sex! I know, I'm a hopeless romantic :)
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September 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this story and hopefully write other Chara stories not many authors on this forum seem to like Chara
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September 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Never let it be said that you don't understand the meaning of the words 'fan service'.
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September 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
last 2 chapters have been excellent, good job
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August 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter as always. Thanks for updating the story!
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August 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I went to the fights and a hockey game broke out.
That's pretty much how I feel about this story. I came for the sex. But now, the sex is secondary. I'm much more interested in the love story. And that's exactly how it was in the show. The spy stuff was secondary to me. What I was mainly interested was the love story.
So I liked that Sarah had some pangs of jealousy. Even if she talked herself out of it. If you're really going to mimic the show, you'll throw in a triangle. After all, if Sarah isn't going to give him something real, Chuck on the show would look for it someplace else.
That's pretty much how I feel about this story. I came for the sex. But now, the sex is secondary. I'm much more interested in the love story. And that's exactly how it was in the show. The spy stuff was secondary to me. What I was mainly interested was the love story.
So I liked that Sarah had some pangs of jealousy. Even if she talked herself out of it. If you're really going to mimic the show, you'll throw in a triangle. After all, if Sarah isn't going to give him something real, Chuck on the show would look for it someplace else.
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August 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
really great chapter, I like that you made Sarah appear jealous at certain times and defensive of what they had. I think that's all you really need to do until you're ready to get them into a relationship properly. Sarah needs to understand that it's because it is Chuck, and not the status of the 'relationship. Clearly they are still getting to know each other, Sarah is confused on what she should and shouldn't know about him, hopefully she keeps asking those questions.
Anyway great job.
PS: Since Chuck knows she is a detective, I am expecting handcuff sex as soon as possible haha
Anyway great job.
PS: Since Chuck knows she is a detective, I am expecting handcuff sex as soon as possible haha
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August 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another awesome chapter. Thank you! Please keep adding to your story. This is definitely my favorite story out of all the chuck stories. I have to say it reminds me how my husband and I started out! We didn't have a real date until we were engaged. Thanks!
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August 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter but when is sarah going to go down on chuck? And this is coming from a female perspective.