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for Just A Game

by MoreCharahPlease

person another fan
schedule October 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So damn hot. I'm on fire reading these sex scenes. I love all of it. Just the right amount of dirty talk. Not that I'd be upset if there was more. I especially like Sarah asking for more. Lot of people sort of requesting things, and so I'll join in. Not that I'll blame you if I don't see it, obviously. But I think it'd be really hot to see them having angry sex. I know that is a little Ooc for Chuck, but maybe role playing? And in your summary, you said there is bondage but Sarah hasn't whipped out those cuffs yet. Just saying. wink!

This is just flawless erotica. Better than titillating. I want to go out and find my own fuck buddy now. Just to get rid of the lust I have in me after reading this story. Wow. More Charah please??? wink!
schedule October 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another great one! The part where Sarah really considered how much Carina enjoyed listening to them have sex got me curious. Will we see a threesome in the future? Looking forward to the next chapter, sounds like it should be pretty hot.
person excusemyfrench
schedule September 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating! Another great chapter.
I really like where their sexual relationship is going, even if I'm getting a little frustrated with the slow-moving emotional one.
Some reviewers got me scared that you're gonna turn Chuck into some kind of killer, hope it's not where you're going cause it would be very OOC :)
person CT
schedule September 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, curious about the phone call obviously, but also interesting to see when Sarah relaxes her "rules", spends the night with him and actually sleeps etc
schedule September 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh cliffhanger! As always another awesome chapter. Always happy when I see this story has been updated. Can't wait for the next one!
person Heemeyer
schedule September 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh spaghettios, what happen?! Hopefully it will lead to more fucking. And Chuck and Sarah becoming official.
person anon
schedule September 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Good story! Is Carina the newest murder victim?
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit what was the phone call?! Great f'ing chapter! I loved the phone sex! I also love how they are comfortable experimenting with each other. But my faves was how chuck finished the night. I love to read about a guy not afraid to go down on a women
person Anon
schedule September 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story's sex scenes turned me on so much that I grabbed my husband and gave him the best night of his life. Just wanted to let you know. This is some incredibly impressive and HOT writing. I wish all romance novels made me this turned on. I'd read more of them! Wow!
person tam
schedule September 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is just top notch erotica. Sometimes I find stories here that are too much for me, and I end up being a little grossed out and have to leave the story. Just not my style at all. But this is just so hot. I feel it between my legs when I read it. And I'm able to actually imagine it without being weirded out...? I don't know how else to explain it. BEing able to imagine a couple screwing when you read it without thinking it's corny. This isn't corny at all. It's just really freaking sexy. Big big compliment. Thanks so much for this, it's my favorite story ever honestly.