rate_review Reviews

This is great, like the way Sarah and Chuck's relationship is developing. Hope you don't have them hook up with other people before realizing what they truly want, though. Had enough of that BS during the show itself. (Threesome with Carina is ok though, because smut)

you reeeally give readers what we all want and i love that about this story. can we get handcuffs soon? or some roleplay? i liked what one reviewer said about sex in the buy more when it's all closed up. and if you do decide to do more with the non-sexual stuff, i'm all for it. if not, and it sticks to sex, i'm all for that too. this is some reeeally fantastic smut.

It's nice to see Sarah actually staying the night. I hope she's starting to look at their relationship differently now..

Chuck, my man. Backdoor lover. Now to see Sarah freak when she wakes up with Chuck. "Oh noes but we caszh!"

Also, I've seen people pushing for a threesome with Carina but I think it'd be a leap for Sarah to suddenly hanker for some poontang.

Personally, I think it'd be more interesting if Carina approached Sarah and said that since she listened to the sex, she'd like to sample some of that herself and so Sarah hooks her up with Chuck and watches them. Or if she joins in, it's strictly the ladies fucking Chuck, not each other.

I like the girl-girl action but I don't think it works here.

Uh, as hot as 3somes can be, I have to say it'd be very out-of-character for both Chuck and Sarah, in my view.

Like others have mentioned, Sarah staying the night at Chuck's place is a new development for the two, and it's one that I welcome. It's about time. I'm hoping it leads to more.

Another hot chapter and it looks like Sara will stay the night since they are both drunk I just wonder how they will feel in the morning

Excellent chapter. Hot sex as usual but certainly upped the hotness in the last chapter. Can't wait to see the conversation they have when they wake up next to each other, knowing Sarah she will probably pull away. As usual can't wait for more, still my favourite story on here.

I'm hoping things start to develop a bit faster from now on. I was actually a bit disappointed when Chuck agreed to be just fuck buddies many many chapters ago, it seems to me that things haven't changed too much since then, there's just sex and more sex which can get a bit boring no matter how well you write it.

I think you're a very talented writer but perhaps (and I might be completely wrong about this) you don't trust your own ability to keep the readers interested if you cut down the amount of sex and focus on character/relationship development. If that's the case, let me assure you, you got nothing to worry about.

It wasn't much, but I like that Sarah's finally starting show some signs of maybe thinking about wanting to be more than just sex partners. Or maybe "think" isn't the right word, it's still unconscious at this point, but at least it's some progress.

While I like well written Chuck/Sarah smut a lot I'd be happy to see their relationship progress at a bit faster pace than what we've seen so far. I wouldn't even mind if you didn't include sex in every chapter but instead focused of their feelings for each other. The story is of course yours to tell as you prefer but I think it would be a good time to have Chuck and Sarah (especially Sarah) reconsider things!

Thanks for writing.