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Awesome story. Update soon

Updateeeee!!! It's my favorite! !!!

this is suuuuuuper hot. sometimes i feel a little disgusted or uncomfortable by the stuff i see on this site. but this is just really great smut. and the story is great too.

I would read your sex scenes over every single erotica novel I've ever read. Have you ever thought about writing erotica? You would sell faster than E.L. James. And your sex isn't abusive or rape. It's two adults consenting to have really fantastic sex. I really hope we see the end of this and that you keep writing. And I hope someday you actually make money from your writing. Because you deserve to.

Cannot WAIT to read more!

Thank you for the anal! ...never said that before in my life. HA!

This was absolutely great. And speaking as someone who didn't request it, but sorta hoped you'd write it, I really enjoyed Sarah taking it upon herself to initiate anal sex. And I think that she probably did need liquid courage before she would do it. I just hope it isn't something that she decides she regrets the morning after. That would sort of take the fun out of what was really a hot sex scene. Kudos. This is just great smut.

I agree with what a couple other reviewers have been saying. You're kinda getting pushed by reviewers to do a threesome with Carina, Sarah, and Chuck. And while this story IS about sex, mostly, and I know you're writing it to test out your smut-writing capabilities, you are really really really good at keeping Chuck and Sarah in character. In spite of their sexual exploration. Let's be honest....you know canon Chuck and Sarah had really hot sex. Look at the beginning of vs Honeymooners. How many meals did the French guy bring them? Like 5 or 6? They probably ate it off of one another's bodies. In between really great sex.

So I like that you keep them in character even though this is an AU and they're exploring with positions and stuff. But I think a threesome would be out of character. Seriously. For both of them. And even though Carina teases Sarah and wants to know all about her sex life, she seems caring and knows Sarah pretty well. I think she can tell Sarah has deeper feelings for Chuck. And I don't think she'd be willing to ruin things for Sarah by suggesting it. My two cents.

Anyway, this is so great. I can't wait for more!

Wow! Really great chapter! I think smut-wise it's the best you've written yet in this story.
It's really perfect how the sex keeps getting hotter as they get closer. Same as everyone, I can't wait for the morning after, I hope Sarah won't take too many steps back now that they're really moving forward.
I think your Chuck and Sarah are exactly in character. Chuck is leading Sarah to a deeper relationship just by being his adorable self, and she is stubbornly ignoring her obvious feelings for him.

Thank you for updating this story, and also for taking the reviews into account. You're not only very talented but you're trying your best for us to enjoy your story and that's really appreciated.

This story is incredibly hot, and also fairly sweet with the way Sarah is obviously starting to develop feelings for Chuck, as much as she avoids thinking about it. Keep it coming!

I liked it, it seems like they are going to experience their first 'morning after' too? Unless you decide to skip it

Another awesome chapter. Thank you! So you mentioned the handcuffs. I really hope they get used in a future chapter!