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by MoreCharahPlease

person mcp fan
schedule November 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely hate myself because I find a new chapter of Just A Game and I want to take all day to read it but instead I just explode through the chapter. It's fine, I'll just do a reread of the whole thing again after I write this review.

Honestly, I would pay so much money to read this, so thank you for letting us read your work for free. It's just the hottest, best written stuff around. Thanks, MCP! I'm a big fan!
person Anon
schedule November 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love reading this story and look forward to more. I wouldn't mind if Sarah abandons the no relationship policy that is already failing her. But I enjoy the way it's all unfolding. The Characterizations of the Chuck and Sarah are very engaging
person excusemyfrench
schedule November 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
As usual, another great chapter! It moves the story along, and it's hot.
I really hope you update soon, because the next chapter sounds very promising. Thanks again for updating this story!
person CT
schedule November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good idea! Sex marathon!!!!! I look forward to it. I liked how the next day was not awkward for them and that he didn't hesitate to pleasure her! Bravo! Thank you
person lauren reads
schedule November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've definitely woken up like that before. And unfortunately I wasn't quite as glad about what I'd done the night before. That's another story.

I continue to be impressed by the fact that each sex scene remains fresh and just as exciting as the last. I'm all for bringing things back around. Honestly, I'm in a sexual relationship, and I enjoy myself just as much in the original missionary position as when we're doing something acrobatic. Depends on my mood, of course, but that's how it is. Right?

So I'll be glad for any sex scene, no matter what Chuck and Sarah are doing to each other. Your writing makes each touch really exciting for the readers. Like..really exciting.Haha!

Thanks! Can't wait for more. :)

P.S. I know some say it is a little boring seeing all the sex stuff, but they ARE on a site for adult fan fiction, and a lot of this is going to be porn. At least you have a path you're moving along. Which I appreciate. But I also REALLY REALLY REALLY love reading the sex. Damn it's so hot. Keep doing what you're doing!
schedule November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Guh sex marathon with Sarah. Chuck Bartowski you lucky bastard. Can't wait.
person Mufc87
schedule November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as usual. Hope you have them getting kinky and experimental in their sex marathon. Hope you update quickly as the next chapter sounds interesting.
person dev
schedule November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow i want so much more right now.

sorry to sound super demanding, but i don't usually review. i know. i'm one of those people. but i couldn't help reviewing for this. because you need to know. this is the stuff.

i mean, wow. this is so so so good. and i would love to read this and only this 24/7 or until my eyeballs pop out of my head or something. it's just so delicious. i cannot stop rereading the stuff i've already read. i hope you publish irl sometime and let us all know so that we can buy it. that would be so great. i'd support your writing any day. thank you! hope there is more soon!
person Luke
schedule October 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really wish you would update this story quicker, the wait in between chapters is unbearable, that's how good this story is.