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November 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Dis one hot ass chapter.
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November 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Quote: "Don't get me wrong I like the relationship aspect as well, but Sarah's inner dialogue with herself where she says she doesn't want a boyfriend even though she's clearly fallen for Chuck is quite tiring to be honest."
I find that tiring too, but that's exactly why I was hoping the plot would finally move forward. I think I'll be skipping the next couple of chapters if they're focusing solely on sex, and start reading again when there's some character development. Don't get me wrong, I like smut, but enough is enough.
That said, the author can and should write whatever he/she wishes, and I'll be reading what I like.
I find that tiring too, but that's exactly why I was hoping the plot would finally move forward. I think I'll be skipping the next couple of chapters if they're focusing solely on sex, and start reading again when there's some character development. Don't get me wrong, I like smut, but enough is enough.
That said, the author can and should write whatever he/she wishes, and I'll be reading what I like.
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November 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So I don't really understand why people feel like they need to tell an author if they've decided not to read anymore/will be skipping chapters. That makes no sense at all to me. They could just not say anything at all, skip the chapters, and come back to read. Or just stop reading altogether. But this urge to tell the author is annoying to me. Like them telling you what they will/wont read is going to somehow make you rethink your decision.
You said in your notes before the very first chapter, very clearly, there will be a little plot, but lots of sex. And that you're using this to improve your smut writing in particular. Yes, I really like your plot, and I know I will like when it moves forward. But I'm enjoying every chapter you put out there. Whether it moves the plot forward or is a chapter full of sex. Btw, this is ADULT fanfiction. Yeah some stories aren't sex-heavy, but the purpose of this site is to be a safe haven for people who want to read smut stories. There are other fic sites that host stories with plots that constantly move forward. And honestly, for a story that's primarily about sexual exploration between Chuck and Sarah, you are moving the plot forward. Every chapter, I see it moving forward. I can see Sarah's walls lowering, her ideas of what being fuck buddies means changing every time they get together to have sex. You can see them both warming to one another, obviously Chuck less so because it's just Sarah's POV, and you can see them both getting more comfortable with new things in the bedroom. I think with that comes the opening up of oneself to that person. So yeah, the plot IS moving forward. I didn't have to dig that much to come to the conclusion.
In summation, morecharahplease, I thoroughly enjoy and support this story the way you've written it so far, and I assume that I'll continue to enjoy and support it whether a chapter has a lot of sex or whether it very obviously moves forward. I don't mean to be snarky to other reviewers, but I feel like maybe you needed to read something a little more supportive. Happy writing. And thanks for this story.
You said in your notes before the very first chapter, very clearly, there will be a little plot, but lots of sex. And that you're using this to improve your smut writing in particular. Yes, I really like your plot, and I know I will like when it moves forward. But I'm enjoying every chapter you put out there. Whether it moves the plot forward or is a chapter full of sex. Btw, this is ADULT fanfiction. Yeah some stories aren't sex-heavy, but the purpose of this site is to be a safe haven for people who want to read smut stories. There are other fic sites that host stories with plots that constantly move forward. And honestly, for a story that's primarily about sexual exploration between Chuck and Sarah, you are moving the plot forward. Every chapter, I see it moving forward. I can see Sarah's walls lowering, her ideas of what being fuck buddies means changing every time they get together to have sex. You can see them both warming to one another, obviously Chuck less so because it's just Sarah's POV, and you can see them both getting more comfortable with new things in the bedroom. I think with that comes the opening up of oneself to that person. So yeah, the plot IS moving forward. I didn't have to dig that much to come to the conclusion.
In summation, morecharahplease, I thoroughly enjoy and support this story the way you've written it so far, and I assume that I'll continue to enjoy and support it whether a chapter has a lot of sex or whether it very obviously moves forward. I don't mean to be snarky to other reviewers, but I feel like maybe you needed to read something a little more supportive. Happy writing. And thanks for this story.
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November 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
people always write about sex marathons, but it's kind of unrealistic. the body can't physically go through that much and still be capable of all of that. i mean, going for hours on end and climaxing that many times isn't plausible.
if you're going for unrealistic, though, then it works. like, if you are just writing it because you want to, then okay. just know it isn't very realistic. Chuck and sarah would be in a lot of pain if your sex marathon actually happened. just some friendly advice/constructive criticism.
the sex scenes are really hot. there's my nice thing.
if you're going for unrealistic, though, then it works. like, if you are just writing it because you want to, then okay. just know it isn't very realistic. Chuck and sarah would be in a lot of pain if your sex marathon actually happened. just some friendly advice/constructive criticism.
the sex scenes are really hot. there's my nice thing.
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November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
hot chapter, well written, good job
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November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
F'ing awesome! Just reading the first few chapters i knew i would love it! I am happy you used the handcuffs but even more excited and surprised with how the chapter unfolded. I look forward to more please! Thank you! !!!!
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November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you are going to be focussing on just sex for a while. Don't get me wrong I like the relationship aspect as well, but Sarah's inner dialogue with herself where she says she doesn't want a boyfriend even though she's clearly fallen for Chuck is quite tiring to be honest. It's good to see Sarah starting to get a little kinkier as well. Hope to see her get really wild and kinky during this sex marathon. Already looking forward to the next chapter.
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November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Love the story line, too. Just wish someone would write something similar for my 3 fav programs, Bones, Castle, & Rizzoloi&Isles. Still, love this one. Thanks for posting.
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November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is such a hot story.
I am fine with both the plot and the sex. But looking forward to a sex marathon! Well done!
I am fine with both the plot and the sex. But looking forward to a sex marathon! Well done!
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November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I didn't expect an update so soon, so good surprise! Even if I'm one of the reviewers nagging you about moving the plot forward, I still liked this chapter a lot. Really, who could complain about a sex marathon? :)
I don't mind the plot being on hold, as long as you plan to finish this story at one point. Until then, I'm really grateful for any update you post. Keep them coming! (really bad pun not intended)
I don't mind the plot being on hold, as long as you plan to finish this story at one point. Until then, I'm really grateful for any update you post. Keep them coming! (really bad pun not intended)