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I still like this story, even though their relationship has progressed too slow for my tastes.

There was one weird moment in this chapter, where you switched to third person narration for a while. I guess it would have been more challenging to write what you did in first person, but certainly not impossible. It's not really a big deal, and I prefer third person in general, but the way you took felt a bit out of place.

Another superb chapter. Think the plot went at the right speed in this chapter. Rather then Sarah have a complete reversal on her relationship stance which would of been way of base on how she's been so far, but she was at least entertaining the fact that chuck could be her boyfriend one day and that he would be good for her. I hope you get the next update out quick because I think it's gonna be wild with Sarah agreeing to everything chuck asks. Keep up the great work.

This continues to be excellent! Looking forward to every chapter.

I really love this story. And the progression is perfect. Stick to your plan!

I love that she's starting to entertain the idea that he's not her boyfriend YET. I'm not AS worried about her pushing him away for some reason. I was also glad to see that you didn't go the route of having Bryce and Jack be the same person (it seems). I was wary of a "what are the odds?" moment.

Technically, there was a part toward the end (starting with "I felt really bad for him...") where later in that paragraph you switched to third person then stayed there for a couple of paragraphs before returning to first person. But overall I really enjoy how well written this is and how well it flows. Thanks!

...from previous review...

Forgot to mention, that shower must be huge! ;)

Did I mention how hot the anal stuff was in Chapter 13? Cause it was great.

Another great chapter! I'm still enjoying every single update of this story. Thanks again for keeping up the good work.

Boy Anonymous reviewer you said it, nothing says great sex like choking out your partner. Fucking moron.

Ignore the idiots MCP your story is awesome. Can't wait to read your next installment and hope the keep trying new things. I'd like to see Chuck try to get her to squirt again. I've always found that hot. Also maybe have them hit up a sex club for public sex in a future chapter. I don't know just throwing out some ideas. Until next time!

Thank you! I am one of the people who is loving the sex marathon! Applaud you! I ho0e i don't have to wait long for the next chapter!

More. Please. Just wow.