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by ItwasMerlin

person Anonymous
schedule August 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

ahh, rare bones smut. i don't know what author you wanted to be like you're trying to make characters as appear as they are on the tv then slowly make them out of character or have fun with characters and you will make them as you see fits? you could use suggestion from below, the one with sweets snap his finger to force bones transform into slutty personality. i'm sucked at giving ideas or suggestion but if you wants some suggestion.

you could force bones into having some kind of therapy for whatver she did and sweets at first do actually therapy stuff before disgusing therapy to use hypnosis. from there, you could make her completely out of character and becomes slutty whenever sweets wants to or you could make her sleep and sweets have his way again just like this chapter but records all of the "sessions" for blackmail material as means slowly break her so you don't have to completely make her out of character. you could also make sweets hypnotizing everyone, including booth, so sweets doesn't gets caught with his crimes like if they do gets caught then sweets can hypnotize whoever into "forgetting".

person Anonymous
schedule July 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm hopefully that you will write more chapters of this story. You could make Sweets learn to use hypnosis on Bones similar to your Gaius story or use hypnosis on Bones to make her forget/then remember by using hypnosis words thing.

person Anonymous
schedule July 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Reaally good stuff, I really liked the way you described bones (the character). Try writing some hypnosis but have the sex go on between sweets and bones in the same room booth. Like the snap of a finget and she starts to suck his dick. Stuff like that, keep it up.
person Anonymous
schedule June 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
To Will30. ... I'm not against carrying this on , after all I find Brennan hot . If you have any ideas , scenes you would want to see etc do say. ... It may inspire me as I'm struggling with other stories. Thanks for the review , suprised it's still being read ....
person will30
schedule June 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Wish there was more to it, but understand why only one. Really like your possible future of Sweets using hypnosis on Brennan. Also, like (I'm prob only one) Brennan pretending to be hypnoisede and enjoying Sweets attentions.
person Jm
schedule July 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting since there is not much of that pair, much less smut.. It's king of disturbing that sweets would do something like that, but I'm guessing that this is not a character driven story, but I would like him showing some remorse, maybe this is his dark obsetion, his addiction.. As for ideas you are asking for there's always drugs and sedatives.. Ugh I feel horrible for giving you ideas! Rape should never be entertaining but I guess it is..
person CT
schedule April 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
loved it, there isn't enough good bones smut

please tell me you're still working on your Sarah story, would love to see more of that too