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for Chasing a Butterfly

by OpenPage

person Anon
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Tom's actions proves that he is a good man . He knows he made a tragic mistake and wants to atone.I know their love is strong.
person Tracy
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I didn't see that coming! I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm hooked!
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was an emotional chapter. I loved it! So that's who Tom called ,his lawer. I can understand his need to right his wrong , but poor Tom. The guilt must have been getting to him. Also the ending was so sad ,Dennis being thrown out of the court room.
person Anon
schedule March 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Tom's getting his a game back,and another great chapter to add to your collection!
person vidalhbea
schedule March 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good reading,it was what I expected.I feel for harry,he wants to help dennis,even if he dosent care for poor tom.oooh I wonder who tom gonna call?
schedule February 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So good . As i keep saying each chapter just gets better.Poor Tom, bad Dennis
person Anon
schedule February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh,that was a good ending to this chapter!Wonder what happened to the tapes.It just keeps getting better. :)
person Anon
schedule February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is good stuff.Just started reading and I'm hooked.
person Anon
schedule February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
What a steamy way to start off a chapter, I loved it. Dennis must care so much for Tom to get hom to fight for his future.It ptoves that love is strong.I hope they make it together.They deserve to be happy.
person Anon
schedule February 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was well worth the wait. I just loved the way you have this chapter written. You can clearly see the love between booker and hanson. I know its a dumb question to ask,but r u going to write anymore booker/hanson stories? Hope so.