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May 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yet another awesome chapter. Tom told Dennis what
he needed to say. I know Dennis feels hurt , but he's not looking at it from Toms point of view. Booker is being pig- headed. Booker who? Ouch!
he needed to say. I know Dennis feels hurt , but he's not looking at it from Toms point of view. Booker is being pig- headed. Booker who? Ouch!
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May 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! I can't believe ,it Tom and Mosco? Hmmm.Poor poor DenniS. I think he's in for a rude awakening. You were right about not liking the way things turned out, but I trust you and I'm sure you have something good planned. Can't wait to see what it is. All in all another great chapter.
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May 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Things look like they're falling apart for both Tom and Dennis. As sad as it is ,maybe that's what they need so they can move on. Like I said I don't know where this is going, but I'm looking forward to seeing how this pans out. I feel bad for both,but more for poor Tom. I hope Harry can help. As always great chapter and looking forward to the next.
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April 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was not expecting that. I love it! Don't know where you're going with this,but I can't wait to see. Until next time.
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April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. The way this chapter was written and Toms reactions. I liked the way you wrote it ,the reader can know how and why Tom acts the way he did. Another great chapter.
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April 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! This is a master piece. You my friend outdid yourself! I loved it! Poor Tom looks like he's going to suffer for his actions. Can't blame Dennis for how he feels.
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April 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is getting so good! I can't wait to find out what el jefe's reaction will be.Tom might be overconfident in thinking he' ll be okay. Who knows if he will be.
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April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god what did Tom do?Whats wrong with Denniss mother? A great chapter to your story. Loved it!
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April 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Tom and poor Dennis.So sad it had to happen that way. I'm loving the the way it's written, Dennis feels betrayed ,but Tom obvously wants to do the right thing so he can go on with his life.Yes another wonderful chapter. Of course you knew that.
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April 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Your use of spanish is great . I'm so hooked on this and thank you for writting such a great story. I hope you continue with such wonderful stories.