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July 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yikes! Booker sure was mad. He didn't handle that little piece of news well about Mcleod.At least he had a chance to cool off. I didn't know the extent of Toms injuries. Wow. They did a number on him. Poor Tom. I hope they can move forward and Tom can heal from his ordeal. All in all another awesome chapter. My sister in laws cat seems to like your story too. He gave it two paws up!
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July 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Gotta have my daily dose of Dennis and Tom. This time I think I overdosed on it. I don't care. Its just too good!
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July 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Dennis to the rescue! Toms hero. Another awesome chapter well done. Poor Tom, I'm sure he didn't want that job anyways. Finally Dennis is thinking with his head. What have we here another mystery charactor? Ohhh, I wonder if this McLoed will be a threat. Hope not.
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July 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Dennis on a caffine high is somthing else.
I've done that before . Boy was that a cool tine. They had to pry me off the wall. Anyway, Dennis is what Tom needs . I think he can give him all the TLC he needs.
I've done that before . Boy was that a cool tine. They had to pry me off the wall. Anyway, Dennis is what Tom needs . I think he can give him all the TLC he needs.
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July 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just had to review again. Poor Tom. Dennis has his work cut out for him.I love how your story comes alive. Its like I'm feeling what they're feeling. A mark of a true story teller.
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June 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter.
Poor Tom, he seems so...broken. It looks like he gave up and not fight for himself.
Dennis must be so heartbroken seeing him like that. He proved how much of a man he is by telling Tom about Mosco. It took a lot of fortitude. I commend him. He is truly a good man. If any one can help Tom it is Dennis. Let's face it they belong together and make a damn good couple. Like I said awesome chapter,and can't wait for the next.
Poor Tom, he seems so...broken. It looks like he gave up and not fight for himself.
Dennis must be so heartbroken seeing him like that. He proved how much of a man he is by telling Tom about Mosco. It took a lot of fortitude. I commend him. He is truly a good man. If any one can help Tom it is Dennis. Let's face it they belong together and make a damn good couple. Like I said awesome chapter,and can't wait for the next.
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June 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I think this is some of your best work. Whatever happen to Tommy must have been pretty bad. Hoping he'll recover. The fates throw them together, yes,but its only because they were ment for each other. Wishing you the best. Thumbs up on this latest chapter.
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June 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I didn't like this at all...I love it! Yet another great chapter.Ana didn't waste any time. A tire iron? Yikes! Poor Tom,but at least Mosco did the right thing. It proves that he did love Tom. I was saddened by hs death. I was starting to like him.If only he knew Tom survived his ordeal. Mosco will be missed. That last part was also sad. Poor Dennis.
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June 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! This just got even better!First Tom gets released and he says bye to Mosco. A somewhat tender moment. I'm going crazy trying to figure out what Moscos plans are for Tom. Ahh! Whatever it is ,it doesn't sound good. Mosco seems to have loyalty to this mysterious jefa. Then there's the arrival of Ana, Juans wife.Yikes!! Could this be part of the plan that Mosco initiated? I'm just going bonkers trying to find out. Can't wait for the next chapter. Im looking forward to it.
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May 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well worth the wait! I'm liking the new Mosco, but can't help thinking what his plans are for Tom . This chapter really grabbed my attention. Especially when Manning appeared in Toms cell block. I kept thinking he was going to rape Tom, but I was surprised when Mosco killed him. What a twist! I just loved it! Tom showed courage testifying against Manning, so brave! And what a way to spend a b- day. Very hot! Until next time.