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(Rafiki voice) update. It is time

please split the next chapter in two, its been so long since a new chapter was released

This story is great . While the thought of Morgan out smarting Sarah takes a little bit of imagination. I really like it , Sarah being dominated by him and enjoying it is hot . It seems some people complain but I wouldn't worry about that . I loved the Chuck/Sarah on the show but reading about them having sex seems almost vanilla. Please update soon

You could split it in 2 parts maybe?

Splitting it is a good idea but only if theres a good point to split it at e.g between build up part and sex part, or if theres multiple seperate sex parts then between them in some way. I appreciate the update and am glad to hear your writers block has gone somewhat. So excited for the next chapter

Just so people know , as i realize a good few people are waiting for this . My writers block seems to of cleared and i am slowly hitting my stride up to 7500 words and counting . The only thing is with what i want to add , this chapter could be almost double maybe more , especially as i dont want the 'good bits' to feel rushed . I may split it in two , but i am not sure . Your ideas definitely sparked it so thank you . when Ill update i dont know , but i thought you deserved an update due to how long its been. As always ideas are welcome . Merlin

Merlin, I hope you get over your writer's block soon. Here are few ideas..Morgan's birthday - he asks Sarah to lie to Chuck and be on his dick come 12 AM or at 12:01 AM Chuck sees the tape. He bangs her multiple times on his birthday and sets her free on 12 AM the next day. Another scenario..Since Morgan noticed Sarah trying hard to not lose herself fully, he orders Sarah to get herself off while he is lodged inside her. He sees Sarah's half hearted effort, joins in and Sarah squirts and the thing is repeated a few times. This would be degrading to Sarah as she humiliates herself with squirting orgasms while giving more control over Sarah to Morgan.

I don't think I have ever been more eager for a new chapter of a fan fiction story than I do for this one.

If you need settings for any future chapters theres a lot of places that Morgan should definitely fuck Sarah. The ones that come to mind are: in Sarah and Chuck's apartment, in Castle or the Orange Orange (after checking for cameras), or even in the Buy More (The Managers office if Morgan is already the manager in this story, or otherwise somewhere else like the home theater room or bathrooms).

In answer to some recent reviews , No Sarah wont come to like her arrangement with Morgan . I think you just took my slutty submissive Sarah comment to literal . She's been submissive in her own way , and coming to enjoy it in a twisted way but hating herself for it . I will never have her seeking Morgan don't worry , the blackmail will be the only reason shell do anything but i will have Morgan make sure she knows who's in charge etc. As for the idea of another man fucking Sarah , Morgan himself wouldn't want that just yet because hes only just started enjoying Sarah himself and he wants to make her realise hes in charge more etc but its definite possibility . Another female is different on the basis he gets to always be present etc and involved . Control will be a big pointer for Morgan as its not like hes ever had much in his life so he would somehow need Carina ,zondra or whoever to let him be in charge of the situation . He would want Sarah to realise who's 'top dog' at all times . I really like the webcam idea , Morgan could be involved occasionally on screen as well and have some old pervs telling him how to fuck Sarah and what not. Keep any ideas coming