i love it. hopefully the next update won't be 10 months later. please do try to update more quickly. plus i do not understand why you keep second guessing yourself and doubting your work so much. this thing's awesome. please please... 2nd part update... asap
it's ok, the sex scenes are starting to sound all the same
The person with the curious blue eyes is either carina or casey. Carina is obviously gonna get involved. But if its casey I'd like to see him on chucks side and not sleep with Sarah. Also would like him to lose respect for Sarah as well, and maybe tell her she can't be a spy and a serious girlfriend. And that she made the wrong choice in fucking the mark because there must be hundreds of female agents that could seduce a mark. It would be nice to actually see someone in chucks corner and if it's him I hope he doesn't help her in covering up what she's doing.
I love this story so much. I'm not sure I could ask for more.
Think the thing that Sarah does that surprises them both, is orgasm during anal. That's the only thing I can think of. Hopefully you update quickly and not in 10 months time again, it's just too long between updates.
The anticipation is palpable.
The update coming today?
Merlin here . Really sorry to anyone who was waiting today for an update as it won't be coming . I've been called into work on overtime and won't be home till late (typing this on my phone on my break). But I'm also up early morning so can't stay up to long etc . I need the extra money so couldn't say no to the work but have no fear I'm off tomorrow . Only have to edit it ... although it's a long chapter.
So I hope you can wait just one night more haha sorry people
Merlin
hello everyone Merlin here . Actually have good new regarding this story , im hoping wednesday to have the next chapter up and edited . sorry about the wait , its been a literal , motivated not motivated etc with this for various reasons . Its gotten to the point where no matter how much i change re write i dont like it haha so im just going to give you what ive got and hope it is ok . Its over 18000 words so i do hope someone finds it okay .
thought you deserved a little update . See you in a few days
Merlin