Very nicely done.
Nice update. This is just my preference, but my favorite is seeing Sarah realising she has no choice but to submit to him. So I would have had Morgan make Sarah give herself the facial. I'd have him push her to do things like strip, dance for him, make a video following a script, maybe pick up a guy in a bar and fuck him. .
So now we need the next part. Please don't make us wait for 9 months this time.
I love people who leave a review saying they are not as interested in the story anymore, yet still were interested enough to leave a review!!! Keep up the good work Merlin! Some of us are very much interested!
I've tried to read this story objectively and I'm not really having any real issues with the plot, what there is of it, but try as I might I'm finding it very difficult to enjoy the sex. I mean that is really why we come here and if its not working then that is a problem. I think its because the idea of anyone having sex with Morgan Grimes is simply not hot on any level. And there is my issue. Him having sex is just too ichy and repulsive for me to even enjoy Sarah being a slut. There is simply nothing exciting or stimulating about it no matter what Sarah does to him. I've never been a fan of the bearded troll and him being the male in this fantasy is just yuck! It's too bad because you are a pretty good writer but this story has the wrong character to turn me on in any way. In fact my reaction is just the opposite.
I often wonder if people walk by stores that someone invested a lot of time and energy into setting up just the way THEY wanted and say to themselves "I'd never fucking shop there. It's completely not my taste or style."
Then I wonder what kind of person it takes to think they are important enough to stick their head in the shop's door and announce exactly that to the people inside for no other reason than to draw attention to themselves.
I wonder a lot of things about people...
Last chapter wasn't as good as I was expecting. Don't think that's due to a drop in your quality of work. But more for the fact that I've lost interest in this story due to how long it's been since it was updated. For a while I was excited and anticipating a new chapter, but after a while I just couldn't be bothered to honest. I find myself reading other stories instead. Yeah some may not be great quality but at least they update frequently.
great chapter love that you kind of incorperated Sarahs season five seduction .....although i bet Morgan wasnt her chosen choice . please update sooner , this is one of my favourite stories but it's so rare we get to see more .
If we saw the stockings and suspensder get up is there any chance of some other Sarah costumes being used ? princess Lea comes to mind or one of her leather catsuits . or weinerlicoius or double oo or ... you get my drift .
or maybe you could bend some scenes in the show to fit in with Morgans blackmail , like off the top of my head the scene he wakes up to find Sarah getting orange juice in a revealing get up .
It's finally back and what a chapter it is. Great stuff. Can't wait to see what happens next.
That was HOT. Some points it felt slightly jaded but even you admitted that . But for the most part that was the best one so far . I to hate Morgan like another reviewer said but I suppose that's the point . He's like an extreme version of Morgan with the intersect but he has something even better . Sarah's being watched ? I have an inkling who but I love the fact she's so frazzled by everything that's going on she doesn't even notice . Some posters think she might cum during anal due to the hint your giving ..... now that would be hot . And please update soon