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for The Blackmail of Sarah Walker

by ItwasMerlin

person jake
schedule March 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i really good job so far can't wait for more hopefully chapter 3 will be out soon and will get the future chapters a little bit faster anyway awsome job keep up the good work
person Wolfe
schedule March 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please update, loving the story
person mike
schedule February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really don't mind the slower pace. Mostly because we don't get a enough Chuck stories. So I'll take what I can get. It helps that this is a really enjoyable story though.
person boo
schedule February 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Something about this story has got me intrigued. Please carry on x
person AA
schedule February 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a fan of the subtle Chuck bashing, you say stuff like he isn't the best she's had and he's obviously getting cheated on by the two people closest to him, my fingers are crossed you at least give him some sort of backbone by the end of this. I also had a red flag about the best she's had at sex part, if you make Morgan that, I will actually laugh irl.

Solid second chapter, this whole makes Sarah look stupid but can suspend belief
person Chaosbleeds
schedule February 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Cannot wait for the rest of the story. Two thumbs up, sir!
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I beg of you, let Chuck find out about this crap soon...and I mean really really soon. Then have Chuck enact his revenge on both Morgan and Sarah. Maybe even have him cheat on Sarah in a moment of weakness. Overall, I love this story so far, it's pretty hot, but Chuck is my favorite character so I need him to have some type of win. Please let Chuck find out and get revenge!
person diabloeffect1982
schedule February 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love the story cant wait to get to the proper fucking.wondering will u have chuck discover this or not.hope u make sarah cone to like the cheating element of it.good that u continued this cant wait to read the next chapter
schedule February 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter slutty Sarah stories are always entertaining to read although I feel they are out of character. I don't like though when they make Chuck oblivious or extremely forgiving. You should definitely have him get revenge somehow on Sarah and Morgan.
person Reyes
schedule February 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful second chapter. Nice build-up u got going. Can't wait for the 3rd chapter.