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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okay I go to sleep and wake up to find my emails filled with all this haha . Now , I understand your arguments but let me explain my thought process , and if you don't agree then I'm sorry this story won't be for you .
Some woman have unknown desires to be dominated, that's a fact you can look up if you don't believe Me . Now Sarah has been in control with most likely all of her sexual encounters , even ones for a mission , even though the show doesn't show it , it's a possibility . She's a strong woman who's always in control , but when she was with Morgan she had control at first , until he turned that around and that's the part she slightly enjoyed , the rougher part where she had no say.
As for Sarah craving Morgan? I never hinted at that , in fact I've made it a point to show the situation makes her feel disgusted with herself. So while she may get enjoyment out of the act itself , when it's done she'll just hate herself even more . Chuck will always be her main priority, so she'll go through with it only to hate herself even more afterwards. So do not think she'll be seeking Morgan out , but she can't ignore him to much either , or call his bluff otherwise her life with Chuck will be gone in an instant as Morgan has to much material on her .
I hope your understanding my thoughts , if it's not enough I apologise. There are some great stories on this site you will enjoy more .
Merlin
Some woman have unknown desires to be dominated, that's a fact you can look up if you don't believe Me . Now Sarah has been in control with most likely all of her sexual encounters , even ones for a mission , even though the show doesn't show it , it's a possibility . She's a strong woman who's always in control , but when she was with Morgan she had control at first , until he turned that around and that's the part she slightly enjoyed , the rougher part where she had no say.
As for Sarah craving Morgan? I never hinted at that , in fact I've made it a point to show the situation makes her feel disgusted with herself. So while she may get enjoyment out of the act itself , when it's done she'll just hate herself even more . Chuck will always be her main priority, so she'll go through with it only to hate herself even more afterwards. So do not think she'll be seeking Morgan out , but she can't ignore him to much either , or call his bluff otherwise her life with Chuck will be gone in an instant as Morgan has to much material on her .
I hope your understanding my thoughts , if it's not enough I apologise. There are some great stories on this site you will enjoy more .
Merlin
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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The story is well written i'm not denying that, you certainly have talent as a writer. As for women liking to be dominated i agree on that point. But if she only enjoys the act with Morgan cause she is being dominated for a change, i suppose i can understand your thoughts with that line of thinking, even though all she would have to do is ask chuck to be rougher with her. Cause we all know chuck would do anything to make Sarah happy.
As to never hinting that Sarah would crave Morgan, “This cock is going to be your best friend, and mark my words I'll have you begging for it eventually". Maybe i take this line the wrong way, but the way i interpreted this sentence was that she would eventually beg for it.
I'll keep reading this story, as i say your writing is very good. Its just my thought process was that she enjoyed far too much for the first time, I thought she would of been far too guilt ridden to really get in to as much as she did. cause let's face it Morgan aint just a mark, he's chucks best friend.
As to never hinting that Sarah would crave Morgan, “This cock is going to be your best friend, and mark my words I'll have you begging for it eventually". Maybe i take this line the wrong way, but the way i interpreted this sentence was that she would eventually beg for it.
I'll keep reading this story, as i say your writing is very good. Its just my thought process was that she enjoyed far too much for the first time, I thought she would of been far too guilt ridden to really get in to as much as she did. cause let's face it Morgan aint just a mark, he's chucks best friend.
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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope Merlin keeps writing this story as he/she sees fit because I am getting a ton of enjoyment out of it. My biggest desire would be to see Morgan pimping her out.
As for the previous review that quoted the line from Morgan about Sarah eventually craving his cock. That's a line from Morgan's perspective. I'm not really sure why you would think that would necessarily lead to Sarah actually craving it. It's what Morgan wants and hopes for. Whether it actually happens is another story.
As for the previous review that quoted the line from Morgan about Sarah eventually craving his cock. That's a line from Morgan's perspective. I'm not really sure why you would think that would necessarily lead to Sarah actually craving it. It's what Morgan wants and hopes for. Whether it actually happens is another story.
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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Anon reviewer. I simply am not going to get into an argument about a sex story. And I'd like to point out that no where did I "resort to name calling". I am pretty sure you are the one who used the term "cheerleader".
I've made my point and said how I view the story. Once Sarah cheated on Chuck with a mark and Morgan blackmailed the woman Chuck loves (so since the beginning) I stopped caring about the actual characters. For me in no way is Sarah cheating on Chuck believable and Morgan behaving like this is even more so. What does it matter if Sarah enjoys it a little? Both her and Morgan are past redeemable anyway so it's just about being hot now.
And constructive criticism is one thing but you don't have to be an ass like you are. I was just defending the author so they wouldn't possibly lose interest in writing this because your an asshole who takes sex stories WAY too seriously. You can get mad all you want but I don't understand, if you don't like the story just don't read it. I know crazy idea right.
I've made my point and said how I view the story. Once Sarah cheated on Chuck with a mark and Morgan blackmailed the woman Chuck loves (so since the beginning) I stopped caring about the actual characters. For me in no way is Sarah cheating on Chuck believable and Morgan behaving like this is even more so. What does it matter if Sarah enjoys it a little? Both her and Morgan are past redeemable anyway so it's just about being hot now.
And constructive criticism is one thing but you don't have to be an ass like you are. I was just defending the author so they wouldn't possibly lose interest in writing this because your an asshole who takes sex stories WAY too seriously. You can get mad all you want but I don't understand, if you don't like the story just don't read it. I know crazy idea right.
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June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Gotta love people trying to police the morality of my anonymously consumed pornography. What the actual fuck?
Definitely "The Blackmail of Sarah Walker." Even if it only began that way and becomes something else.
I loved this chapter. Sarah loves Chuck and I'm sure he's a very sweet lover. But maybe (in escapist porn land) she just wants to get fucked?
I loved that Morgan immediately went down on her until he coaxed a true reaction out of her. Loved that she rode him but got a little more physical pleasure than she expected when he shifted to fuck her. And that instruction to wrap her legs around him was followed suspiciously quickly!
They need to have a birth control discussion so he can cum inside her next time.
Glad you're headed the direction you're heading. Anyone who doesn't like it needs to realize some things about the websites they are visiting...
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Definitely "The Blackmail of Sarah Walker." Even if it only began that way and becomes something else.
I loved this chapter. Sarah loves Chuck and I'm sure he's a very sweet lover. But maybe (in escapist porn land) she just wants to get fucked?
I loved that Morgan immediately went down on her until he coaxed a true reaction out of her. Loved that she rode him but got a little more physical pleasure than she expected when he shifted to fuck her. And that instruction to wrap her legs around him was followed suspiciously quickly!
They need to have a birth control discussion so he can cum inside her next time.
Glad you're headed the direction you're heading. Anyone who doesn't like it needs to realize some things about the websites they are visiting...
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ChuckIsAwesome stop with the cheerleading, jesus christ.
You say this:
" He obviously doesn't understand this is a porn fic and it's written to be hot not realistic. This story stopped being realistic when Sarah cheated on Chuck and Morgan went after Chuck's girl."
That is complete bullshit. If he didn't want the story to be realistic he wouldn't of spent time setting up the blackmail, he wouldn't of spent time explaining WHY and HOW Sarah got blackmailed. You are completely simplifying your whole argument by implying that a story OUTSIDE of canon or in a AU cannot be realistic. There are 1000s of writers who constantly write REALISTIC and BELIEVABLE stories that are COMPLETELY removed from canon, that are completely removed from the INTENDED pairing. So don't try and sit there and suggest that it cannot be realistic. Writers do it all the time, something NOT in canon CAN be realistic. Jesus christ.
The story didn't become unrealistic when Sarah cheated on Chuck. Sarah COULD be blackmailed, Sarah COULD do things she doesn't want to do to remain with Chuck. BUT to have Sarah fuck Morgan once and now start loving it is just pathetic, it goes against the ENTIRE premise of the story, the story is essentially over, the first 4 chapters are now pointless. Why even bother trying to REALISTICALLY explain how Sarah got blackmailed if you're just going to now be unrealistic about it?
"Sarah cheating on "real" Chuck, but that's not the case here because this isn't suppose to represent the show." If nothing else, understand that it doesn't HAVE to represent the show to be realistic, it doesn't HAVE to represent the show to progress naturally, organically. HE SPENT 4 FUCKING CHAPTERS building up the blackmail TRYING TO BE REALISTIC ABOUT THE SCENARIO. Stop excusing the story because you cannot understand how a story can be realistic EVEN while being removed from canon.
You say this:
" He obviously doesn't understand this is a porn fic and it's written to be hot not realistic. This story stopped being realistic when Sarah cheated on Chuck and Morgan went after Chuck's girl."
That is complete bullshit. If he didn't want the story to be realistic he wouldn't of spent time setting up the blackmail, he wouldn't of spent time explaining WHY and HOW Sarah got blackmailed. You are completely simplifying your whole argument by implying that a story OUTSIDE of canon or in a AU cannot be realistic. There are 1000s of writers who constantly write REALISTIC and BELIEVABLE stories that are COMPLETELY removed from canon, that are completely removed from the INTENDED pairing. So don't try and sit there and suggest that it cannot be realistic. Writers do it all the time, something NOT in canon CAN be realistic. Jesus christ.
The story didn't become unrealistic when Sarah cheated on Chuck. Sarah COULD be blackmailed, Sarah COULD do things she doesn't want to do to remain with Chuck. BUT to have Sarah fuck Morgan once and now start loving it is just pathetic, it goes against the ENTIRE premise of the story, the story is essentially over, the first 4 chapters are now pointless. Why even bother trying to REALISTICALLY explain how Sarah got blackmailed if you're just going to now be unrealistic about it?
"Sarah cheating on "real" Chuck, but that's not the case here because this isn't suppose to represent the show." If nothing else, understand that it doesn't HAVE to represent the show to be realistic, it doesn't HAVE to represent the show to progress naturally, organically. HE SPENT 4 FUCKING CHAPTERS building up the blackmail TRYING TO BE REALISTIC ABOUT THE SCENARIO. Stop excusing the story because you cannot understand how a story can be realistic EVEN while being removed from canon.
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June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow hey anon you a little mad buddy. I've never seen anybody get this upset over a sex story and It's a little sad. I'm not even going to continue this argument. I don't want you to hurt yourself.
Hey Merlin you should have Sarah enjoy the fuck out of it to mess with anon. He may kill something though so proceed with caution.
Hey Merlin you should have Sarah enjoy the fuck out of it to mess with anon. He may kill something though so proceed with caution.
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June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
And by the way the amount of words that are capitalized in your review is absurd.
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May 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
please don't make enjoy the thnings she is 'forced' to do with Morgan, there's a difference between cheating and blackmail. Having her enjoying it is just purely resorting to Chuck bashing
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May 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
First part of the seduction looks great, really excited for the next one after two non-sex chapters.