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September 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Definitely looking forward to the anal. Love this story.
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September 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome merlin, I really have been enjoying the way you write it! Appreciate you not giving up on the story, cant wait for the next chapter!
Just some suggestions that I thought of was maybe Morgan owes a favor to Jeff and Lester and they have a threesome with Sarah. I think someone already mentioned this before but thought I'd bring it up again. Or Morgan gets in financial trouble and has Sarah seduce a big black guy that wants to hurt him for not paying what he owes.
I do hope you have Sarah wear a school girl uniform, maybe have her do a striptease for Morgan in that outfit. Sarah does have a nice pair of legs too, she should wear stockings and heels for Morgan when he calls her over.
Having Ellie in this story is definitely a must, I'm glad you will have her in this, especially if it gets Morgan a threesome with Sarah and Ellie!
Hope my suggestions help you some. Thanks again for this awesome story!
Just some suggestions that I thought of was maybe Morgan owes a favor to Jeff and Lester and they have a threesome with Sarah. I think someone already mentioned this before but thought I'd bring it up again. Or Morgan gets in financial trouble and has Sarah seduce a big black guy that wants to hurt him for not paying what he owes.
I do hope you have Sarah wear a school girl uniform, maybe have her do a striptease for Morgan in that outfit. Sarah does have a nice pair of legs too, she should wear stockings and heels for Morgan when he calls her over.
Having Ellie in this story is definitely a must, I'm glad you will have her in this, especially if it gets Morgan a threesome with Sarah and Ellie!
Hope my suggestions help you some. Thanks again for this awesome story!
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September 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Why couldn't it be devon who blackmailed her. You know someone hot and not disgusting like morgan. I was never a morgan fan but the the story idea is a good one. But as a woman i would have killed first before f'ing him with any of my orifices.
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September 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about second guessing yourself Merlin, what you've written so far has been great so don't worry about it. Good to hear the next chapter is almost done.
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August 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
My apologies to anyone awaiting the next chapter, I'm about 90% complete but Ive hit a bit of a mental road block. Not to mention I keep second guessing what I'm writing. Good news is I'm now away from work for two whole weeks so I'm hoping to crack on with this asap.
Sorry for the wait
Sorry for the wait
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August 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
No worries on the wait. I'm just super excited its continuing. Great story this far. I love reading a sexually humiliated Sarah.
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August 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Update soon? :)
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August 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hi Merlin,
Thanks very much...I have a lot of ideas that I could email you if you like. I would suggest you keep your characters true to how you created them, not how they were on the show. The way you have made Morgan he is a pretty nasty guy right now, so it wouldn't be out of character for him to really try to use his power over her...keep up the good work!!!
Thanks very much...I have a lot of ideas that I could email you if you like. I would suggest you keep your characters true to how you created them, not how they were on the show. The way you have made Morgan he is a pretty nasty guy right now, so it wouldn't be out of character for him to really try to use his power over her...keep up the good work!!!
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August 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hi Merlin,
Thanks for your review, I love your story as well and am looking forward to more! Let me know if you ever want to collaborate....I got a few ideas which are very non Charah so would be most likely hated here lol
Thanks for your review, I love your story as well and am looking forward to more! Let me know if you ever want to collaborate....I got a few ideas which are very non Charah so would be most likely hated here lol
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August 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter please!!