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Obviously we all come here to read about hot sex as that's the point of this site. So hopefully you don't use the Jeff and lester storyline, I mean I really couldn't imagine any sex scene that involves them 2 as being hot. Quite frankly it would be disgusting. And the fact they wouldn't keep quiet about it would involve major storyline problems, for eg they would want to fuck Sarah whenever they wanted in exchange for their silence. Surely Morgan wouldn't risk his arrangement with Sarah, as it stands he can fuck her when he wants, but if people find out about them having sex, their arrangement is over.

As I say I can see Morgan wanting Sarah to have sex with other women, but I can't see that he wants to watch her have sex with other men.

Morgan would want to see Sarah fuck other men because he likes degrading her. He doesn't have any real feelings for her. In this story he sees her as an object for him to use. While I agree that Jeff and Lester wouldn't be able to keep quiet, I'm still not sure that matters. I'll believe whatever you want me to if it involves Sarah getting used like this. It's really hot. You could always work in other guys to, whether it's Bryce or an original character or someone else we've seen.

Hey Merlin, awesome story. Any idea when you will be able to update the next chapter?

Whoo! Update! Great as always. Can't wait for the next one. Ellie should def. be included

This is in reply to my last reviewer mikey who brought up the point that Morgan shouldn't be good at sex . I actually had that thought aswell when I first started writing this ,but then I watched the episode where he ended up in bed with Carina. As a character you would assume she's had a lot of lovers , but even she admits to Morgan there wasn't many better . Just thought I would clear up my thought process, thank you for the review. Also thank you to the readers who have know pushed this over 13,000 hits that's crazy :)

Merlin

Merlin just wondering when will the next chapter be up

Well I'm currently working on it diablo but I couldn't give you an exact date . I don't plan on it being as long as the last chapter but you never know so that's why I couldn't say. I do have an idea for a chapter title to give you a clue at what's coming . I think I'm going to call it one asshole meets another . Take from that what you will . Thank you for the continued support

not bad so far, the premise is effectively over but the sex is well done. think the only thing i would of done different to you is not have morgan so good at sex straight away. more then likely he doesnt have many sexual experiences, so he would be fairly nervous with someone of sarahs experience. i mean he seems to be a master at eating women out even though he probably hasnt done it all that much. i would of liked to have seen him be not so good at the beginning but as he fucks sarah more he gets more confident and demanding and his sexual permormances increase, and when he reaches his confident stage thats when sarah starts to enjoy it. hopefully sarah doesnt start craving morgan cause that would just be wrong. hoping chuck kicks morgan and sarah out of his life for good at the end of this story. good work so far.

This is one of the better stories out there, not just for Chuck but in terms of erotica. I honestly don't see how people can't like this story or premise of they are on a site like this. The plot line is great, well developed character interaction. Lots of people complaing that Chuck is being run over...ect....come on people Chuck is not real! Merlin's version might not be what some people like, but that's not his problem. He is giving us all a little gift with every chapter, and since 12k people have viewed it I would say that most of us think he is doing a hell of a job! Merlin Ever Forward!!!

Another great chapter. Your writing is really good. Can't wait to see what happens next.