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I agree with that mty14. I may have been attributing thoughts that weren't there for posters. See, my initial post was in response to whether Morgan would want to see Sarah fuck other guys. I thought the original post asking why would he want to see that was saying that Morgan has real emotional feelings for Sarah and wants her to enjoy these acts because he has some need to please her. I don't see things that way. I see it as he wants Sarah to enjoy it because it's all the more humiliating.

Bottom line for me is that I just want to read more and more chapters of Sarah being humiliated. There are still so many things to be done. From a facial to anal to bringing in third parties.

At the minute she hates it, but I guarantee within a few chapters she will be loving it. I bet in a future chapter she will be making love with chuck but she won't be able to orgasm without thinking of Morgan. What's Morgan's endgame? Make Sarah enjoy the sex and become. Addicted to it as he lives out his ultimate fantasies? Then what? Let's chuck and his cheating girlfriend live happily ever after? I think hes training her to be his submissive and crave the sex so she will do anything he wants and she forgets all about chuck. That's just my opinion though, maybe I'm wrong but I doubt it.

The moment Sarah becomes Morgan's sex slave is the moment this story probably jumps the shark and either flat out ends or ceases being interesting to read. The only interesting part of the story (aside from the sex) is Sarah's internal struggle against Morgan and what he's doing to her. Once that's gone there's very little left. There's a reason people have been railing against that eventuality in these 100+ reviews.

Honestly I hope that doesn't happen. The last thing I want is Sarah craving more time with Morgan. I just don't see how this story ends otherwise and what Morgan's future plan is.

I'll answer what my goal is to some of your questions. I've made it clear in a few replies before that at no point will Sarah be going for Morgan or have any other feelings beside hate towards him . Will she get pleasure from him or enjoy it in a twisted way yes but it will always be an unwanted enjoyment. At no point will she fall for Morgan,Chuck will always be number one like some have said if she just starts going to Morgan and dropping her panties begging for it the whole story looses the vibe I've been trying to go for . Maybe I'm not showing that we'll enough . As for Morgan , it's simple, Sarah's like the impossible beauty no one like him could imagine getting so he takes his chance with the blackmail. But I'm trying to make it seem like he's drunk with power, after all someone like him having control over the top CIA agent who's drop dead gorgeous to top it off his ego will go through the roof much like when he had the intersect.And yeah he likes giving her pleasure for two reason , one it excerts his power over her humiliating her, making her body react more to him etc and two he enjoys pleasing her because who wouldn't want to make Sarah Walker moan . I actually called the last chapter the man with two personalities because when he's not alone with Sarah's he's his normal overly freindly self , but when he wants her and steps into a room his over side takes over his newly found darker side . Hope that answers some questions as to what I'm actually looking to get across in the story. So If I'm not filling what you want there's plenty of other great fics on here .
Lastly though I just want to make a hot fic , sometimes it might not be believable, my main concern is people enjoying it .

Merlin

Suggestions

A morning where Chuck is getting ready for work and Morgan texts Sarah to come to his room quickly and he tells her to get on her knees and he cums in her mouth...they hear Chuck calling out to Sarah and Sarah kisses Chuck goodbye whilst just swallowing Morgan cum

Morgan sets up a gloryhole type of thing and makes Sarah make all these guys get off, at the end you could make him say something like 'so how did you like sucking off Jeff and Lester? or something, her being furious etc

I don't really like the Ellie threesome idea, because I think Ellie would tell Chuck straight away. I wouldn't really buy that situation. It could work with Carina I guess?

Maybe Morgan could get Sarah to convince Chuck that she wants a threesome. You could show her trying to suggest morgan as the third person to Chuck without giving anything away. You could then have Morgan be really aggressive to her and Chuck starts to sense something weird is going on. Morgan really wants to prove to her/himself that she makes the most noise for him. Maybe Sarah saying something like 'not as good as chuck' could spark it.

Facial. I can't believe you haven't had Morgan blast all over her face. It's probably the most demeaning thing he can do to her.

Family dinner. Morgan is sitting near Sarah (Chuck on the other side) and he grabs her hand whilst his penis is out under the table and he forces her to jerk him off. You could also have him fingering her and her trying not to show any reaction

I think the important thing is to keep Sarah hating Morgan, don't make her like him at all

Not bad so far. Must agree with the last reviewer on his suggestions.

Not sure I buy the Ellie threesome idea either as she would surely tell chuck and wouldn't risk her marriage, unless she's being blackmailed to somehow. Maybe her and Sarah have a girls night and Sarah slips Ellie some drugs or seduces her or something and Morgan films it. Not sure if Sarah would go through with that as Ellie would hate Sarah in the future for that, so Sarah may keep chuck but Ellie would never approve of Sarah after that.

The facial idea I agree with, that would be the most demeaning thing he could do to her, but knowing the Sarah in this story she would probably love that anyway.

And as ideasss said the most important thing is for Sarah to keep hating Morgan, if she starts to like him after everything he's put her through, it just wouldn't make sense and would probably ruin your story.

Not sure if having Ellie involved works in this story. If Ellie finds out about Sarah cheating on Chuck she would never trust her again. Personally I think Ellie would do everything in her power to split Sarah and chuck up, I'm also not sure if Ellie could live with the guilt of cheating on Devon, and knowing her brothers girlfriend was cheating on him. I just don think thy could live in each other's lives for the rest of their lives with knowing what they've done.

Now carina would work, she would do anything to help Sarah out with her situation I think. You just have to be careful with how many other people you bring into this story, because you could end up writing yourself into a corner, for eg a lot of people requesting Jeff and lester how would that work? Them two morons would never keep quiet if they fucked Sarah walker they would tell everyone.

And surely Morgan wouldn't want other men fucking Sarah? Women yeah that's sexy as hell, but why would Morgan want to watch Sarah with other men? Just wouldn't make sense. Hope everything works out for chuck in the end, think he deserves to be happy after all of this. And hopefully Sarah comes up with a plan or something to get out of this arrangement, she ain't tried to find a way out yet.

Is realism really our chief concern here?

Looking forward to Sarah learning to love the anal.
Is Morgan going to tell her to practice with Chuck (so Chuck doesn't notice the change) or spring it on her (Ouch!)

Thumbs up on the facial idea.

I'm sure you can work around the threesome angles.
It won't be "in character" but if it was would any of this be happening?
I mean, I like the idea of Sarah loving Chuck but loving getting fucked and demeaned by Morgan. (shrug)
Run with it, dude!

These have been great ideas and while I won't promise I'll use them they do help inspire me to write . I keep getting the Jeff and Lester suggestion and while I think he was hot it's a very tricky storyline to put in without it seeming bad just because they couldn't keep it secret .