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It's ridiculous. It's not even believable within the confines of this absurd story, which was obviously what I meant. This Sarah's feelings are too strong, which means she's not a good enough actor to hide her hatred (she hasn't been so far). Morgan would see though it instantly and get upset that she wasn't "performing" well enough and threaten her some more. It wouldn't work though, because even with all the motivation in the world, she would still be terrible at it. Repeat until he gets frustrated enough to punish her some other way. Scene over.


And even if you disagree, as I've said before, it would still be mind-numbingly similar to the first time they had sex anyway. No reason to repeat stuff we've already seen.

The author asked for ideas, so I gave him one. Honestly I'm not a big fan of this story anyway. Yeah the sex is hot but I don't like all the cheating aspect of it. I'll carry on reading it though, cause I can't wait till chuck finds out and kicks them all out of his life and goes and finds a better best friend and girlfriend.

I would just encourage the author to do whatever he or she wants to do. The story this far has been fantastic and one of my favorites in the fandom. Please keep doing what you're doing and I'm sure it will work for the vast majority of your audience.

Not sure I agree with you there MV007. Morgan's treating Sarah like a slut because he knows she enjoys it. Morgan wants Sarah to enjoy the sex with him, that why he's doing the things he's doing. If Morgan truly wanted to degrade Sarah, he would do things to her that she hated and things she didn't enjoy. If Morgan truly doesn't have any feelings for Sarah and wants to degrade her, whys he making sure she enjoys the sex and why is he doing things he knows she'll enjoy? He wouldn't care about her pleasure and her enjoying it if he wanted to degrade her, in fact he would do the opposite of what he's been doing.

Derek does have a point. What has Morgan done that has degraded Sarah?

Everything he's done, he's done with her pleasure in mind and making sure she enjoys it. As a previous reviewer said things like a facial would be degrading, but he hasn't done anything like that. Yeah he does see her as an object he can use for his own pleasure, but even when he's fucking her he's trying to make sure she enjoys it. If he was trying to degrade her he would make sure she hated the sex, not enjoy it has he has been doing.

I do enjoy the debate this story had caused especially when I wasn't even going to go any further after the first chapter. Having only written it mostly as a way to practice my writing.

I don't think he's trying to make sure she enjoys it. I think he gets off on the fact that she is slightly enjoying it. And he has degraded her by forcing her to commit sexual acts against her will. He's face fucked her. He's forced her to beg for him. All of this while knowing she didn't want to. I think continuing to force Sarah to do things hat she doesn't want to do would be in character for this story. It's a power game for Morgan. And having Sarah fuck other guys is just another power move.

I'm not so sure. I think in a few chapters time Sarah will really enjoy them things. I think he's easing her into slowly but eventually I think she'll start to crave them things from Morgan. Hopefully I'm wrong and she never craves it and continues to hate Morgan, but judging by how the first few chapters have gone that's how I see Sarah going.

And I think Morgan does want Sarah to truly enjoy herself, maybe I'm wrong but he seems to go out of his way to get her to enjoy it. Maybe that's just to prove to himself that he can get a reaction out of her, I don't know. We should find out after a few more chapters.

Debate is all fine and dandy, but I wanna know the ETA of the next chapter. Sorry for being so impatient Merlin, but I am excited for the next chapter.

He wants Sarah to enjoy it because that's just another form of humiliating her. Making her admit to herself how much she's enjoy sex with a man that isn't the one she loves. That's really it. She DOES hate the sex, just on a more emotional level instead of a physical one. Don't know why that's so hard to understand.