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I had one idea involving Carina but I'm not ready to bring her in yet . The reason I want something like that so Morgan can have a lot longer than a few hours with her . Especially for something like the performance act he definitely wouldn't want that rushed . For some reason i always forget princes leia outfit , good choice though

If you do go down the going away route I'd think that would be a few more chapters down the line. At the minute he's happy just fucking Sarah but eventually he probably would get more demanding where he takes her away and makes her his slave for a few days.

Honestly I can't think of any good excuses they could use so they can both go away for a few days. Sarah could say she's going away with carina for a few days but where would Morgan say he's going on his own? Or if Morgan said he was going away with carina, what excuse would Sarah use? Certainly tricky that one cause they both don't wanna get caught.

Actually I've had an idea. Maybe chuck is needed on a mission that involves computers or he's just needed to flash. So Morgan tells Sarah to pretend she's ill or just tired from being overworked, so chuck has to take casey with him instead. That way you don't have to involve carina or anybody else and Morgan and Sarah get a couple days alone together.

The reason I would of rather they go away from Burbank , maybe somewhere hot so Morgan could show Sarah off . I was thinking Morgan to excert more of a power play demands Sarah act the loving 'girlfriend' on a 'couples break ' . Meaning she has to keep an act up the whole time including pleasing him anywhere anytime and anyway he wants . Just ideas obviously,

Not a bad idea, would be humiliating for her as well. If you can get around the both of them disappearing at the same time that idea could work. Maybe Jill sees them there if it's late enough in the story, and she tells chuck but he doesn't believe her cause she hates Sarah. But it puts doubt in chucks mind. Depends on how you want chuck finding out and how your endings gonna go.

I fail to see how that idea is any different from making Sarah seduce him. It's literally the same thing with her pretending to enjoy it and having to beg for it and all that. If he "demanded" she pick the positions, logically she would either half-ass it, keep it boring and simple, or do just enough to get by without breaking his rules. She would never chose anal (or most degrading things) unless he explicitly told her to, which defeats the entire purpose of the idea.

Not that interesting at all. Please don't waste a chapter on it, they take long enough as it is lol.

He tells her beforehand that he wants her best effort, if not she knows the consequences. The Sarah in this story would go all out I think, so chuck doesn't find out what she's done.

Once again, besides being the same as something that's already happened, that would NEVER work. It's like those stories where victims are told to fuck their rapists "enthusiastically" or face harm/some other threat. It's never believable and always corny. Sarah has shown enough defiance in this story that something like that ever happening would be ridiculous, not only to the reader but to Morgan as well. She'd never be able to give the "100% effort" and be convincing because it's not a plausible idea.

You just can't put a character like Sarah in control of a situation, tell her to willingly act the opposite of something that goes to the core of her, and have it all work out 100% fine. It's just lame.

I don't agree. The Sarah in this story would do anything so chuck doesn't find out. Is it believable that Sarah's being blackmailed by a moron? No is it believable that she would cheat on chuck and let Morgan fuck her all the time? No. But people seem to be enjoying it. I don't think it's that much of a stretch to put her in that situation and she would perform. She knows the consequences otherwise, especially if Morgan's forcing her to do it.