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I'm working on it , had writers block after my computer fucked up . Motivation went as I had to rewrite. But my fingers are finally moving again . To anyone reading this , would love your thoughts .if Morgan started to force Sarah to always call him by another name when there alone as another humiliation /power trip what would it be ? Not sure sir or anything to generic would work especially as Morgan's an odd fellow ?

Suffice to say, I'm desperate for an update.

The worst? Ha! Get some perspective.

Like me, Hitler and Satan are sitting around conspiring to ruin your day.

There's a way to offer an opinion without being rude is all I'm saying.

Yet there's always some jackhole who wants to back seat drive and second guess.

Two if you're lucky.

Others can say what they like but I can't? 'Cuz you say so. Pfft.

Pull up a chair and join us at the table. Deal him in, Adolf!

KMA

I don't think mufc87 idea is too similar to the seduction scene. In the seduction scene the only thing Sarah was in control of was picking Morgan up in the bar. When it came to the sex it was mostly Morgan. I can understand why people don't won't that scene but at the same time I do think the idea is different.

It's basically the exact same idea with a minor tweak here and there. And no, I don't want to see it either.

So there's one vote for not reading a scene

Make sure you revolve everything around that, ok?

eh, there's been multiple people that have presented valid reasons why that scene should be skipped. my reaction is that I don't care that much but if you asked me, I don't really want to see it either.

it's always up to the author to decide, but idiots that try to shame people for sharing their opinions (in the fucking review section) are the worst

Maybe whilst chuck and Sarah are on the phone. But whilst on a potentially dangerous mission I'm sure even Morgan is not that stupid.

Thank you for your recent feedback do keep the ideas coming always helps . An update on the next update . My laptop busted , not suprising as it's ancient anyway. But unfortunately I'm unable to get on it and a cess my files . So at this point moment I'm rewriting from memory on my phone the next chapter for this and my Merlin story . Each of them i had at least 4000 words a peice. I'm incredibly annoyed as it makes the process frustrating, I'm also sorry for the even longer waiting period for an update .I won't give up on it though; because even though some don't like it , there must be some who do haha .

Merlin

I agree with the earlier reviewer that having another chapter where Sarah has to act like she enjoys it would feel a lot like the first time where she has to seduce him. Maybe a fair bit further into the story, after some of the other things that should happen sooner (anal, other characters etc.) But I agree about a mission that takes chuck out of burbank for a few days, so that the events of the chapter arent bound by either morgan or sarah needing to be somewhere.

Also, just throwing out a completely different idea, but what about a mission that only chuck can complete (due to needing the intersect for something) while Morgan and Sarah are stuck in the van, and it's there that morgan wants to fuck her. Could possibly even have the comms still on so sarah has to talk to chuck while morgan is eating her out or fucking her. Probably a bit on the unbelievable side, but do with it what you want. Hope you have the next chapter done soon!