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Hmmm... is it bad I want to see a sweet/fluffy Melissa/Hanna one? Yeah, it probably is XD BUT I LOVE THIS!

Really good to see some more PLL on TSSA, as a fellow writer of Liars smut I think it's a sadly underused fandom. And these are well written and entertaining which is another bonus. My only comment is that whilst PWP can be fun (and I've done some myself)it'd be improved if there was more lead-in, seduction and story before we get to the sex.

That said for suggestions - there's a scene where Veronica Hastings is comforting Alison in the kitchen after Alison has been 'scared' that could lead to something more, Ella/Aria and Ashley/Hanna are always good or what about Emily and Paige's first time. If you want guys perhaps Mike gets it on with his sister's friends behind her back (or even Byron dicks his daughter's friends) or one of the Liars decides to coach the football team in a bukkake party... That's the trouble with PLL there's so many combinations and so little time

Look forward to seeing what else you write...

Nice

Pretty hot stuff!

I'd personally like to see Aria's mom and Hanna's mom hooking up.

Also would like to see Ashley sexually dominating Emily & Hanna; maybe after catching them going down on each other.

And Paige, Mona & (perhaps) Lucas giving Alison some well-deserved payback.