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HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!! So hot!

I know you've moved on to other stories, but this was a great concept. The sex was amazing to read.

It'd be fun to see your Chuck and Sarah in Just A Game start experimenting with videotaping themselves having sex like they did here. I can see that being a thing they do, maybe a little later on when things are more settled between them.

But wow, this story was hot. Thank you again MCP!

would love more of this story someday. maybe make the sex a bit hotter though. still it would be a shame if thats where it ends.

Wow this story is amazing. I really hope you write more. Best story on here in my opinion.

I'm not sure why I'm one of the only ones reviewing this story, it's amazing and it has a lot of hits so you know there are a lot of people reading it. Seriously if you posted this over at Fanfiction.net it would get so much more recognition. Just be sure to give it an M rating. Anyway, another great chapter I hope there's more to come, and come on people review! I think I made like 6 out of the 8 reviews.

Is this story over or are you planning to continue it? Hope it's not over I love this story but if it is I hope you keep writing Chuck and post some new stories.

I feel like I'm the only one reviewing considering I have like 4 out of the 6 reviews despite how many views this story has. But I feel that an author always appreciates a review and if me giving a very positive review somehow inspires you to write more chapters then it's totally worth it.

Another great chapter, you do a great job of capturing the characters and if Chuck would have been an HBO show I feel that this could have been an actual script and dialogue because in my head I can actually picture Chuck and Sarah having these conversations. A lot of stories are hard to picture because the characterization is off but yours is spot on. I know its an adult story and more than half is sex (really hot sex by the way), but the non sex stuff, and even the sex stuff just seem very in character and accurate. As do all of your stories.

Great chapter to an awesome story that hopefully will continue for awhile!

Good story.

I'd like to see C&S try some anal sex in a future chapter.

Another great chapter. I'm hoping you continue this story this may be my favorite story on here. Maybe next chapter have Sarah watching the video and Chuck comes home early to find Sarah watching it and masturbating, obviously leading to sex. Anyway just an idea just hoping for more chapters.

Wow very hot chapter. Really loving this story hope it continues for at least a few more chapters.

Awesome chapter but did they forget the camcorder? Keep up the great story can't wait to see what happens when they watch the tapes!