You know who I realized wasn't part of the story so far? Jenna. I would be very curious to know where she is and what she's doing during all of this.
Chapter 18: Love how kinky lesbian sex is the new normal in Rosewood. Good chapter.
Chapter 17: Well, that's interesting. I am kinda curious to know how Maya and the others ended up involved. Not sure I needed the golden shower stuff but it's your story after all. It just seems to come out of nowhere since it wasn't part of the rest of the story.
Otherwise, good stuff though. It makes me curious if this is the end of the story or if other council members may arrive.
Chapter 16: Good to see another update on this. Definitely like how you played it. I'm curious how the council will factor into everything and who will be a part of it.
Chapter 16: Wow... deliciously depraved. ;)
I do hope to see more of this soon. There's so many fun story options with this one.
Chapter 15: That was really hot. I would love to see something similar happen to Spencer and Hanna. Maybe even have Mona and Melissa involved in it.
This is pretty hot. I'd definitely be interested in hearing about what happened between Spencer and Ella or Aria, Mona and Allison. Perhaps both?
Really liking this story so far.
What I think it needs is for a little team up action. Given that the Hastings are all initiated, perhaps a Hastings family meeting? Or some Team Sparia action? Or Hanily? I noticed that Ashley has mostly disappeared from the story as well.
Chapter 13: Heh. This story is pretty out there, but also pretty damn hot.